STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Jakub,

Nice abstract — it will make a great poster. Please find a few small comments 
below. With these addressed, I sign off.

Thanks,
Isaac

The first statement is a bit of a tautology -- "The study of []...is of great 
interest in understanding []". Maybe "The study of quarkonium production in 
p+p collisions is of great interest in understanding the relative importance 
of mechanisms that contribute to its formation, which is an outstanding 
question" or something like that. This formulation would probably require 
breaking the mention of heavy-ion collisions to a separate sentence, 
especially because it would fit better this way with the sentence which comes 
after (you might be able to merge those two).

"during Run17" is unnecessary and can be removed.

"larger data sample"

On Oct 25, 2024, at 09:37, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:

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