STAR HardProbes PWG

[tc88qy <tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Jitka

 Thanks for implementing the comments. I have few further comments for 
your consideration.

Line 4, The production of J/Psi (bound stat...) in proton+proton gives 
....
Line 7-9 remove the sentence of "Whereas at high energies ... a 
different approach"
Line 11 , such as polarization and pT spectra. More studies are needed 
to investigate J/Psi production mechanism.

With these comments be implement. I sign-off

Qian Yang

On 2024-10-24 22:48, Mrazkova, Jitka wrote:
> Dear convenors,
>
>  I would like to sincerely apologize for the late resubmission of my
> abstract and thank you for all your comments. I tried to include the
> comments in the text, and I hope I’ve understood and addressed them
> correctly.
>  Thank you again for your patience.
>
> Best regards
> Jitka Mrazkova
>
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> Hi Jitka,
>    Please find my comments below.
> On production mechanism part,
> Line 4 , Quarkonia, bound states of heavy quarks and antiquarks ->
> J/Psi, bound states of charm and anti-charm .
> Line 5, represent -> give
> Line 6-7, as they allow ... a different approach -> as the production
> of
> J/Psi involves both perturbative  and non-perturbative process.
> Line 9, Whereas at high energies... different approach, you need to
> rephrase the sentence.
> You will also talk about Heavy ion collisions, so please also add
> motivation for that.
> Line 10, to fully explain experimental results such as polarization
> and
> p_T spectra.
> Line 10-12, why do you think J/Psi is special from other quarkonium?,
> If
> no, please change it to J/Psi.
> In general, I suggest you make it more clear on what collisions
> system,
> collisions energy as well as observable you want to show.
>
> Line 14-16, you can mention the collision system and collision
> energies
> as well as observables you want to talk about here.
>
> Qian Yang
>
> On 2024-10-15 22:15, Mrazkova, Jitka wrote:
> > Dear convenors,
> >  I have submitted the abstract for the Zimányi School Winter
> Workshop
> > and I apologize for the late submission. While the deadline is on
> > Friday, I understand the abstract is not required for registration.
> I
> > would like to give an overview talk on recent J/psi measurements at
> > STAR.
> > Thank you in advance for your feedback.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Jitka Mrazkova
> >
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> > Zimanyi School 2024 submitted for review
> >
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Jitka Mrazkova (jitkam7 AT seznam.cz) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69379
> >
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