U.S. ATLAS HL-LHC Upgrade Level 2 and Deputies-NSF only Management Mailing List

[Gustaaf Brooijmans <gusbroo AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

Hello all,

The April VRs are due.  Here are some comments:

*6.4 is missing
*6.4.1: the text is ok (look at 6.5.1 for one that is very good).   But 
you will be carrying $300k in cost variance for the ADC until 
pre-production...
*6.4.3 is missing

*6.5 is good, two small typos: have => has, and that => than
*6.5.1 is very good
*6.5.3 and .4 are missing

*6.6, 6.6.1 and 6.6.4 are missing
*6.6.5: the impact statement is too long - look at 6.5 for an example. 
Basically, we just want to know what the impact is, ie how much delay 
this represents in delivery date.  The explanation text should go under 
explanation, nit under impact.

*6.8, 6.8.2 and 6.8.3 are missing

Thanks,

Gustaaf