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Re: [[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review
- From: Gustaaf Brooijmans <gusbroo AT nevis.columbia.edu>
- To: John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
- Cc: "Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Rosemarie Smith <rsmith2 AT bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review
- Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2025 14:03:01 +0200
Hi John,
Looks good. A few suggestions:
-sl 2: the table is of poor quality. Can you improve that? Also, if you
change the title of the first column to “Charge Question” you won’t need the
confusing yellow box IMO
-sl 4: that’s a pretty old org chart. I attach a newer version.
-sl 9: It’s not Saclay but Orsay that will test 50% of FEB2s
-sl 11: PRR outcome will be pssed with recommendations
-sl 12: I think now you can remove the “vendor just withdrew” comment
-sl 16: reviewers are unlikely to know what the FLX-712 is
-sl 17: add that ADC passed PRR; for FEB2 and LSB2 (and SRTM) maybe better to
say “production QC prep is ramping up”?
-sl 29: the top image looks funky, can you try to address that?
Best,
Gustaaf
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> On Jun 22, 2025, at 00:12, John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu> wrote:
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> Hi all,
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> I have posted a draft of my L2 LAr slides for the upcoming NSF review
> in docdb #1888. Comments are welcome.
> Regards,
> John
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[[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review,
John Parsons, 06/21/2025
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Re: [[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review,
Gustaaf Brooijmans, 06/25/2025
- Re: [[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review, John Parsons, 06/25/2025
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Re: [[Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] ] draft slides for LAr L2 talk at NSF review,
Gustaaf Brooijmans, 06/25/2025
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