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[John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

Hi Gustaaf,

	Thanks for the comments.  I have implemented the changes, along with 
some comments I received within LAr, and uploaded an iterated version to 
docdb.
        Regards,
                John

On 6/25/25 8:03 AM, Gustaaf Brooijmans wrote:
> Hi John,
>
> Looks good.  A few suggestions:
>
> -sl 2: the table is of poor quality.  Can you improve that?  Also, if you 
> change the title of the first column to “Charge Question” you won’t need the 
> confusing yellow box IMO
> -sl 4: that’s a pretty old org chart.  I attach a newer version.
> -sl 9: It’s not Saclay but Orsay that will test 50% of FEB2s
> -sl 11: PRR outcome will be pssed with recommendations
> -sl 12: I think now you can remove the “vendor just withdrew” comment
> -sl 16: reviewers are unlikely to know what the FLX-712 is
> -sl 17: add that ADC passed PRR; for FEB2 and LSB2 (and SRTM) maybe better to 
> say “production QC prep is ramping up”?
> -sl 29: the top image looks funky, can you try to address that?
>
> Best,
>
> Gustaaf
>
>
>
>
> > On Jun 22, 2025, at 00:12, John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu> wrote:
> >
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> >         I have posted a draft of my L2 LAr slides for the upcoming NSF review 
> > in docdb #1888.  Comments are welcome.
> >         Regards,
> >                 John
> >
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