STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Moe,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my comments/suggestions below :

    General comments : You may enlarge your font size of your text in 
each slides. Now, it looks a little bit small.

    1. Title : maybe you want put "p-Xi" before "Lambda-Lambda", 
because you disucss p-Xi first in your following slides.

    2. Slide 4, theminimum-bias trigger -> the minimum-bias trigger

    3. Slide 5, M^2, please define M^2 and put unit behind.

    4. Slide 9: You may mention it is "First measurement of p-Xi in 
Au+Au collisions".

    5. Slide 10, please replace the figure with the one that Ke Mi sent 
to you, in which with less source sizes are used.

    6. which suggests strong interaction -> which suggests attractive 
strong interaction

    7. Slide 2, "Baryon-baryon interactions are not understood very 
well." I am not sure what you want to say with this sentence.
                     I suggest to re-write or remove it.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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