STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[misshiki <misshiki AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your comments.
I modified them.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/measurements-%CE%BB%E3%83%BC%CE%BB%CE%BE%E3%83%BC%CE%BE-and-p-%CE%BE-correlation-auau-collisions-%E2%88%9Asnn-200-gev-rhic-sta

Best regards,
Moe





On 2021-05-15 23:25, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Dear Moe,
>
> Please find below my comments to your nice presentation:
>
> Slide 2: add a reference to the last ALICE paper: S. Acharya et al.,
> Nature 588, 232  (2020)
>
> Slide 4: Add spaces between run years (the table)
>
> Slide 5: Add space between Mass(from..) -> Mass (from ..)
>
> Slide 9: add definition of k*
>
> Slide 10: add definition ok Qinv
>
> With those implemented I sign off.
>
> Enjoy the conference!
>
> Thanks,
> Hanna et al.(ALICE Collaboration), Nature588S. Acharyaet al.(ALICE
> Collaboration), Nature588, 232 (2020)
>
> Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
> PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
>
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> > Wiadomość napisana przez misshiki via Star-cf-l
> > <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 15.05.2021, o godz. 14:38:
> >
> > Dear Xiaofeng,
> >
> > Thank you for your comments.
> > And I also got the comments form TSUKUBA group.
> > so I modified .
> >
> > Please check.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/measurements-%CE%BB%E3%83%BC%CE%BB%CE%BE%E3%83%BC%CE%BE-and-p-%CE%BE-correlation-auau-collisions-%E2%88%9Asnn-200-gev-rhic-sta
> > Best regards,
> > Moe
> >
> > On 2021-05-15 01:28, Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l wrote:
> > Hi Moe,
> > Nice presentation.
> > Please find my comments/suggestions below :
> > General comments : You may enlarge your font size of your text
> > in
> > each slides. Now, it looks a little bit small.
> > 1. Title : maybe you want put "p-Xi" before "Lambda-Lambda",
> > because you disucss p-Xi first in your following slides.
> > 2. Slide 4, theminimum-bias trigger -> the minimum-bias trigger
> > 3. Slide 5, M^2, please define M^2 and put unit behind.
> > 4. Slide 9: You may mention it is "First measurement of p-Xi in
> > Au+Au collisions".
> > 5. Slide 10, please replace the figure with the one that Ke Mi
> > sent to you, in which with less source sizes are used.
> > 6. which suggests strong interaction -> which suggests
> > attractive
> > strong interaction
> > 7. Slide 2, "Baryon-baryon interactions are not understood very
> > well." I am not sure what you want to say with this sentence.
> > I suggest to re-write or remove it.
> > With those implemented, I sign off.
> > Thank you,
> > Best Regards,
> > Xiaofeng
> > On 2021/5/10 22:47, webmaster--- via Star-cf-l wrote:
> > Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > Moe Isshiki (k0nchar0127 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/54908
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