STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[misshiki <misshiki AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you for your comments.
And I also got the comments form TSUKUBA group.
so I modified .

Please check.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/measurements-%CE%BB%E3%83%BC%CE%BB%CE%BE%E3%83%BC%CE%BE-and-p-%CE%BE-correlation-auau-collisions-%E2%88%9Asnn-200-gev-rhic-sta


Best regards,
Moe




On 2021-05-15 01:28, Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Hi Moe,
>
>     Nice presentation.
>     Please find my comments/suggestions below :
>
>     General comments : You may enlarge your font size of your text in
> each slides. Now, it looks a little bit small.
>
>     1. Title : maybe you want put "p-Xi" before "Lambda-Lambda",
> because you disucss p-Xi first in your following slides.
>
>     2. Slide 4, theminimum-bias trigger -> the minimum-bias trigger
>
>     3. Slide 5, M^2, please define M^2 and put unit behind.
>
>     4. Slide 9: You may mention it is "First measurement of p-Xi in
> Au+Au collisions".
>
>     5. Slide 10, please replace the figure with the one that Ke Mi
> sent to you, in which with less source sizes are used.
>
>     6. which suggests strong interaction -> which suggests attractive
> strong interaction
>
>     7. Slide 2, "Baryon-baryon interactions are not understood very
> well." I am not sure what you want to say with this sentence.
>                      I suggest to re-write or remove it.
>
>     With those implemented, I sign off.
>
> Thank you,
> Best Regards,
> Xiaofeng
>
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> > Moe Isshiki (k0nchar0127 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a 
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