STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Zhi and All,

Here are my comments on this poster:

0) Slide 2 - Motivation: (i) last bullet: I am not sure what do we what to 
say here, especially the claim of 'small system size’. How about something 
like: “The high baryon density medium is created in the 3GeV Au+Au 
collisions.  Precision measurements of correlation of hyperon and proton can 
be made from these data sets” ; 
 
1) Slide 1: since the result of the p-Lambda correction function is not shown 
in the poster, should we change the abstract to focus on p-Xi results?

2) Slide 4: (i) title could be more precise: "Particle Identification, Purity 
and Background”; (ii) It is not clear what is plated in the right most plot. 
Add “Background from p_Xi- pairs” or something like that;

3) Slide 5: (i) Result part: It is not clear if the HAL QCD potential is used 
in the afterburner calculation with UrQMD. I think it is important here. (ii) 
I suggest add the result of the Gaussian equivalent radius from the UrQMD 
calculation; (iii) I am not sure we need the bullet starts with ‘CRAB tool 
provides …’ The important difference between CATS and UrQMD+CRAb is that in 
CATS a static Gaussian source is used while in UrQMD+CRAB approach, a 
hadronic transport dynamic model generated the space-momentum distributions.  

Summary part:
(i) I am not sure we can claim that “Make it possible to test …” I suggest 
remove this sentence;
(ii) replace ‘p-L correlation is ongoing’  by “The analysis of p-L 
correlation is ongoing”;
(iii) Last bullet: replace by something like “STAR has collected more than 2B 
events of Au+Au collisions at 3 GeV. Precision results of baryon correlation 
functions will be reported in the future"

4) Overall: I think the layout of all slides can be made better.

Thank you,

Nu


 


> On Apr 2, 2022, at 5:21 AM, Q Z via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> 
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> Dear Xiaofeng,
> 
> Thank you very much for the comments and signing off.
> We update the slide on the same link
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59019
> 
> 
> Best,
> Zhi
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> 主题: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zhi Qin for Quark Matter 2022 
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> Hi Zhi and Yingjie,
> 
>     Nice poster, please find my minor comments below :
>     1. Slide 1, Please put ONLY ONE name there for the STAR collaboration.
>     2. Slide 2, In the 3rd bullet of the motivation : "An attractive 
> p-Xi interaction is observed in p-Pb and pp collisions at ALICE "
>        Please change to "An attractive p-Xi interaction has been 
> observed in Au+Au 200 GeV at STAR, p-Pb and pp collisions at ALICE "
>        Since previously, STAR has reported p-Xi results at 200 GeV and 
> claim the observation of the attractive interaction in p and Xi.
> 
>     With this implemented, I sign off.
> 
> Thank you,
> Best Regards,
> Xiaofeng
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