STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Prabhupada,
   Nice abstract, please include the following comments in the next 
version. What that I sign off.

General comment:
The abstract is in a good shape. We can sharpen it a bit more by 
emphasizing the new results at this conference which are for Ξ and Ω and 
for v3. You can move the comparison to older data at the end where you 
say "results will be compared to other data". Also, we can try to align 
it to the theme of the conference.

"(multi)strange" --> "multi-strange" everywhere

"early stage in"
-->
"early stages of"

"we will present the second"
-->
"we will present new results on the second"

"(multi)strange hadrons such as K_S^0, φ, Λ, Ξ and Ω"
-->
"multi-strange hadrons such as φ, Ξ and Ω"

"transport-based model"
-->
"transport model"

"Finally, the result will be compared to other RHIC energies of beam 
energy scan.."
-->
"Finally, we will show comparison of the new results with the existing 
data on other particle species (π^±, K^± , K_S^0, Λ) and energies from 
beam energy scan.."

"and some physics implications of such measurements are discussed"
You need to revise this line and make a more concrete statement about 
the physics of this analysis that aligns with the theme of the CPOD 
conference.

Best,
Prithwish





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