STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[pdixit <pdixit AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

On 2021-02-04 08:55, ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Prabhupada
> I sign off your nice abstract, with one minor comment that your last
> sentence might be
> a little too long, so that you could split into two parts in addition
> to what is mentioned by
> Prithwish and Jiangyong.
> Best regards, ShinIchi
>
> > 2021/02/04 3:47、Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l 
> > <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>のメール:
> >
> > Hi Prabhupada,
> >  Thanks for considering my comments. The new version looks good. A few 
> > more suggestions:
> >
> >  "AuAu data sets"
> > -->
> >  "Au+Au datasets"
> >
> >  "some physics implications of such measurements"
> > -->
> >  "physics implications of our measurements"
> >
> >  "in order to study"
> > -->
> >   "in the context of"
> >
> >  "with energy are discussed"
> > -->
> >  "with collision energy will be discussed"
> >
> >
> > Best,
> > Prithwish
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2021-02-03 13:38, pdixit wrote:
> > > On 2021-02-03 22:46, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > Hello Prabhupada,
> > > >   Nice abstract, please include the following comments in the next
> > > > version. What that I sign off.
> > > > General comment:
> > > > The abstract is in a good shape. We can sharpen it a bit more by
> > > > emphasizing the new results at this conference which are for Ξ and Ω
> > > > and for v3. You can move the comparison to older data at the end 
> > > > where
> > > > you say "results will be compared to other data". Also, we can try 
> > > > to
> > > > align it to the theme of the conference.
> > > > "(multi)strange" --> "multi-strange" everywhere
> > > > "early stage in"
> > > > -->
> > > > "early stages of"
> > > > "we will present the second"
> > > > -->
> > > > "we will present new results on the second"
> > > > "(multi)strange hadrons such as K_S^0, φ, Λ, Ξ and Ω"
> > > > -->
> > > > "multi-strange hadrons such as φ, Ξ and Ω"
> > > > "transport-based model"
> > > > -->
> > > > "transport model"
> > > > "Finally, the result will be compared to other RHIC energies of beam
> > > > energy scan.."
> > > > -->
> > > > "Finally, we will show comparison of the new results with the 
> > > > existing
> > > > data on other particle species (π^±, K^± , K_S^0, Λ) and energies 
> > > > from
> > > > beam energy scan.."
> > > > "and some physics implications of such measurements are discussed"
> > > > You need to revise this line and make a more concrete statement 
> > > > about
> > > > the physics of this analysis that aligns with the theme of the CPOD
> > > > conference.
> > > > Best,
> > > > Prithwish
> > > > On 2021-02-03 07:01, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > Prabhupada Dixit (prabhupadad AT iiserbpr.ac.in) has submitted a 
> > > > > material for a
> > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/53584
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> > > Hi Prithwish,
> > > Thank you so much for the suggestions and comments. One of the themes
> > > of the CPOD conference is Deconfined Matter. My abstract is related 
> > > to
> > > this topic. I have implemented all your suggestions please have look
> > > at my modified abstract in the given link below.
> > > link: 
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstract_version_3_0.pdf
> > > Thank You
> > > Prabhupada
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Hi ShinIchi,
Thank you for signing off. I have changed the last line as per your 
suggestion.
link : 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstract_version_5.pdf

Thank You
Prabhupada