STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Prabhupada,
  Thanks for considering my comments. The new version looks good. A few 
more suggestions:

  "AuAu data sets"
-->
  "Au+Au datasets"

  "some physics implications of such measurements"
-->
  "physics implications of our measurements"

  "in order to study"
 -->
   "in the context of"

  "with energy are discussed"
-->
  "with collision energy will be discussed"


Best,
Prithwish




On 2021-02-03 13:38, pdixit wrote:
> On 2021-02-03 22:46, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Hello Prabhupada,
> >    Nice abstract, please include the following comments in the next
> > version. What that I sign off.
> >
> > General comment:
> > The abstract is in a good shape. We can sharpen it a bit more by
> > emphasizing the new results at this conference which are for Ξ and Ω
> > and for v3. You can move the comparison to older data at the end where
> > you say "results will be compared to other data". Also, we can try to
> > align it to the theme of the conference.
> >
> > "(multi)strange" --> "multi-strange" everywhere
> >
> > "early stage in"
> > -->
> > "early stages of"
> >
> > "we will present the second"
> > -->
> > "we will present new results on the second"
> >
> > "(multi)strange hadrons such as K_S^0, φ, Λ, Ξ and Ω"
> > -->
> > "multi-strange hadrons such as φ, Ξ and Ω"
> >
> > "transport-based model"
> > -->
> > "transport model"
> >
> > "Finally, the result will be compared to other RHIC energies of beam
> > energy scan.."
> > -->
> > "Finally, we will show comparison of the new results with the existing
> > data on other particle species (π^±, K^± , K_S^0, Λ) and energies from
> > beam energy scan.."
> >
> > "and some physics implications of such measurements are discussed"
> > You need to revise this line and make a more concrete statement about
> > the physics of this analysis that aligns with the theme of the CPOD
> > conference.
> >
> > Best,
> > Prithwish
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2021-02-03 07:01, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Prabhupada Dixit (prabhupadad AT iiserbpr.ac.in) has submitted a 
> > > material for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/53584
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> Hi Prithwish,
> Thank you so much for the suggestions and comments. One of the themes
> of the CPOD conference is Deconfined Matter. My abstract is related to
> this topic. I have implemented all your suggestions please have look
> at my modified abstract in the given link below.
> link: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstract_version_3_0.pdf
>
> Thank You
> Prabhupada