STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Gavin Wilks <gwilks3 AT uic.edu>]

Hello Prithwish,

I have made these changes.

Best,

Gavin

On Mar 5, 2022, at 23:56, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Gavin,
 The modified version is much improved. Please make the following minor modifications:

"may  be  sensitive  to  vorticity  and  hadronization  scenarios of the collision system"
-->
"may  be  sensitive  to  the vorticity  and  hadronization mechanism in the medium"

"not  possible  for  BES-I  data"
-->
"not  possible  with the BES-I  data"

"ten times larger than"
-->
"ten times larger than that of"

With these changes I sign off.

Best,
Prithwish



On 2022-03-05 21:41, Gavin Wilks wrote:

Hello Subhash and Prithwish,
Thank you for the comments. I took into consideration both of your
comments and my abstract is now updated.
Best,
Gavin

On Mar 5, 2022, at 04:07, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
Dear Gavin,
The current version is a good start. Please include the following comments to produce a next version.
I think the part about v_2 and v_3 is a digression and dilutes the impact of your abstract. You can mention about v_2 on line 8 but I suggest you remove it from title and rest of the abstract. This way you can present a much sharper abstract.
line 6:
remove "at the center of"
line 8:
I don't think I understand this line:
"Finite elliptic flow (v2) could affect global spin alignment by pushing more particles toward the in-plane direction; therefore, a precise measurement on centrality and transverse momentum (pT) dependent v2 will help to remove any potential bias in the measurements."
Can you please explain why we need to mention this in the abstract?
line 11:
"The Beam Energy Scan II (BES-II)" --> " The Beam Energy Scan II (BES-II) program"
line 13:
"greater  statistics  for  these  collisions  at" --> "higher statistics data set for Au+Au collisions at √s_{NN}=19.6 GeV"
Best,
Prithwish
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