STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chunjian Zhang <chun-jian.zhang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for the quick and kind revision. please find the new version attached with including your comments below https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022_0.pdf

line 7: In this talk, we will present
----done 
line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify here:
... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
collisions are indicative of ...
---done 
line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
----done 
line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...

---- one sentence is better. how about "and show how it permits inferring...."

thank you, 

chunjian 

On Mon, May 23, 2022 at 5:02 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear ChunJian,

Very nice abstract.
A few suggestions for your consideration. I sign off once these are
addressed.

line 7: In this talk, we will present

line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify here:
... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
collisions are indicative of ...

line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.

line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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