STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chun-Jian Zhang <chun-jian.zhang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for the kind suggestions. Please find the revised version below https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022.pdf

Best regards

Chunjian 

On May 23, 2022, at 9:22 PM, subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear ChunJian,

Thanks for the updated abstract.
Two minor suggestions for your consideration:

line 7:  We  --> we (small letter)
line 16-18: It's a lengthy one. But I am Okay if you prefer keeping it.
Then a better rephrase could be:
"and show how it permits inferring the shape of the colliding nuclei and quantitatively
constraining the nuclear structure parameters." -->   show how it infers the shape of the colliding nuclei and quantitatively constrains the nuclear structure parameters.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-05-23 08:37 PM, Chunjian Zhang wrote:

Dear Subhash,
Thank you for the quick and kind revision. please find the new version
attached with including your comments below
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022_0.pdf
line 7: In this talk, we will present
----done
line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
here:
... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
collisions are indicative of ...
---done
line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
----done
line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
---- one sentence is better. how about "and show how it permits
inferring...."
thank you,
chunjian
On Mon, May 23, 2022 at 5:02 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l
<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear ChunJian,
Very nice abstract.
A few suggestions for your consideration. I sign off once these are
addressed.
line 7: In this talk, we will present
line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
here:
... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
collisions are indicative of ...
line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
Thanks and regards,
Subhash
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