STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear ChunJian,

Thanks for the updated abstract.
Two minor suggestions for your consideration:

line 7:  We  --> we (small letter)
line 16-18: It's a lengthy one. But I am Okay if you prefer keeping it.
Then a better rephrase could be:
"and show how it permits inferring the shape of the colliding nuclei and 
quantitatively
constraining the nuclear structure parameters." -->   show how it infers 
the shape of the colliding nuclei and quantitatively constrains the 
nuclear structure parameters.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-05-23 08:37 PM, Chunjian Zhang wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thank you for the quick and kind revision. please find the new version
> attached with including your comments below
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022_0.pdf
>
> line 7: In this talk, we will present
> ----done
> line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
> here:
> ... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
> collisions are indicative of ...
> ---done
> line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
> ----done
> line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
>
> ---- one sentence is better. how about "and show how it permits
> inferring...."
>
> thank you,
> chunjian
>
> On Mon, May 23, 2022 at 5:02 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear ChunJian,
> >
> > Very nice abstract.
> > A few suggestions for your consideration. I sign off once these are
> > addressed.
> >
> > line 7: In this talk, we will present
> >
> > line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
> > here:
> > ... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
> > collisions are indicative of ...
> >
> > line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
> >
> > line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-05-23 09:04 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> > >
> > > ChunJian Zhang (chun-jian.zhang AT stonybrook.edu) has submitted a
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