STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Chunjian,

Thanks. Looks good.

line 16: "Furthermore, we will discuss ..."

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-05-24 10:32 AM, Chun-Jian Zhang wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thank you for the kind suggestions. Please find the revised version
> below https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022.pdf
>
> Best regards
> Chunjian
>
> > On May 23, 2022, at 9:22 PM, subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Dear ChunJian,
> >
> > Thanks for the updated abstract.
> > Two minor suggestions for your consideration:
> >
> > line 7:  We  --> we (small letter)
> > line 16-18: It's a lengthy one. But I am Okay if you prefer keeping
> > it.
> > Then a better rephrase could be:
> > "and show how it permits inferring the shape of the colliding nuclei
> > and quantitatively
> > constraining the nuclear structure parameters." -->   show how it
> > infers the shape of the colliding nuclei and quantitatively
> > constrains the nuclear structure parameters.
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-05-23 08:37 PM, Chunjian Zhang wrote:
> > Dear Subhash,
> > Thank you for the quick and kind revision. please find the new
> > version
> > attached with including your comments below
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF2022_0.pdf
> > line 7: In this talk, we will present
> > ----done
> > line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
> > here:
> > ... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
> > collisions are indicative of ...
> > ---done
> > line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
> > ----done
> > line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
> > ---- one sentence is better. how about "and show how it permits
> > inferring...."
> > thank you,
> > chunjian
> > On Mon, May 23, 2022 at 5:02 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l
> > <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear ChunJian,
> > Very nice abstract.
> > A few suggestions for your consideration. I sign off once these are
> > addressed.
> > line 7: In this talk, we will present
> > line 11: the ratios of v2 and v3 ... --> Probably you can clarify
> > here:
> > ... the ratios of v2 and v3 in Ru+Ru collisions over those in Zr+Zr
> > collisions are indicative of ...
> > line 16: ... hydrodynamic models.
> > line 17: "and show that it permits" --> It permits to infer ...
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> > On 2022-05-23 09:04 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > ChunJian Zhang (chun-jian.zhang AT stonybrook.edu) has submitted a
> > material for
> > a review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59714
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