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  • From: Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
  • To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
  • Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by ChunJian Zhang for DNP 2022 submitted for review
  • Date: Tue, 25 Oct 2022 14:49:11 -0400

Hi Jiangyong, Chunjian,

I do not see it is a problem, as long as we add a descriptor, e.g.
name it as normalized skewness (via k_1) then there is no confusion.


That would be good. We should do that on slide#8, how about:
"Normalized third central moment \proporto skewness"

And on conclusion slide#:
"enhancement in variance and skewness ratios" --> "enhancement in variance and third order fluctuation ratios"

Best,
Prithwish




On 2022-10-25 12:13, Jiangyong Jia via Star-fcv-l wrote:
Hi, Prithwish,

The "official" definition of skewness is as what you say.

According to wikipedia, there are many other Pearson definition of
skewness with different nomralization (mode skewness, median
skewness). Then we also have "intensive skewness" <(\delta
N)^3>*<N>/sigma^2 defined in a recent paper.

<(\delta N)^3> is can be called third central moment or moment
coefficient of skewness.

I do not see it is a problem, as long as we add a descriptor, e.g.
name it as normalized skewness (via k_1) then there is no confusion.

Cheers,

Jiangyong

On 10/25/22 11:57 AM, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l wrote:

Dear Chunjian,
What you have written is not correct. In STAR we have been
studying Skewness of distributions for more than a decade. See for
example:

https://arxiv.org/pdf/1004.4959.pdf [1]
https://arxiv.org/pdf/1309.5681.pdf [2]
https://arxiv.org/pdf/2001.02852.pdf [3]
https://arxiv.org/pdf/2101.12413.pdf [4]

Skewness = <(\delta N)^3>/\sigma^3 (where, \delta N = N-<N> & \sigma
is the square root of variance)
What you have is <(\delta N)^3>/<N>^3, they are not the same.

Again, note that the quantity you have is related to Skewness but
should be called scaled third order central moment and NOT Skewness.
(Also, note the difference between moment & central moment here.)

Where did you find this definition of Skewness? Is it from one of
the method papers? Do you have a link?

Best,
Prithwish

On 2022-10-24 15:01, ChunJian Zhang wrote:
Dear Prithwish,

Thank you for the comments. Skewness is <(\delta p_T)^3> which is
also
can be called moments since they are the same when one does it from
mean, variance to skewness. Note that kurtosis defined as <(\delta
p_T)^4> - 3<(\delta p_T)^2> is different from the moments.

Others like <(\delta p_T)^3>/<p_T>^3 and <(\delta p_T)^3>/<(\delta
p_T)^2>^3/2 are different normalization ways.

So, here we call <(\delta p_T)^3> as skewness is appropriate.

Best regards
Chunjian

On Oct 24, 2022, at 11:53 AM, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l
<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Chunjian,
Thanks for incorporating my comments. Please note that the quantity
you are showing on slide#8 (lower right plot) is the ratio of
<(\delta p_T)^3>/<p_T>^3 -- this quantity is not Skewness.

In terms of your notations "Skewness" will be something like:
"<(\delta p_T)^3>/<(\delta p_T)^2>^3/2. Since you're not plotting
that so we should not be calling it Skewness.

I think we should refer the quantity <(\delta p_T)^3>/<p_T>^3 as
"Scaled third order moment" or "Normalized third order moment".

On conclusion slide we can say:
"enhancement in variance and skewness ratios" --> "enhancement in
variance and third order fluctuation ratios"

Best,
Prithwish

On 2022-10-24 09:50, ChunJian Zhang wrote:
Dear Prithwish,
Thank you for the helpful comments. With including all the
suggestions, please find the new version at

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/DNP-2022/Measurement-nuclear-deformation-high-energy-isobaric-96Ru96Ru-and-96Zr96Zr--0

Please find the comments included and addressed as follows:
Side#3:
Define "0\nu\beta\beta" somewhere on this slide.
"Rarely experimental measurements" --> "Few experimental
measurements" or "Rarely explored in experiment”
Changed
Slide#4: "based on N_{ch}^{offline} with" --> "based on uncorrected
tracks (N_{ch}^{offline}) in”
Changed
Slide#6: Some texts are overlapping, the page number is hidden.
Changed
Miner & optional comment: the references are not written in
conventional formats (like Zhang and Jia, PRL 128, 022301 (2022)).
Changed
"cancelation" --> "cancellation"
Changed
It is not clear what you mean by "cancellation expected in
non-central collisions". What gets cancelled with what? Also, this
is approximately true, right ? Then maybe say "approximate
cancellation”
Added “approximate". The effect from Beta_3 canceled the v2
ratios.
The 4th bullet is a bit confusing, right? What do you mean by this?
It depends on how the size is defined. Larger neutron skin means
large size, so there's an apparent contradiction between the 3rd and

the 4th bullets.
added "R0"
Slide#7:
"non-linear" --> "Nonlinear" in title and everywhere
Changed
"reflect nuclear structure" --> "reflects difference in nuclear
structure”
Changed
It's impossible to see what you're plotting on the two right
figures. At least write in bigger fonts that you're plotting "Mean
ratio" and "Third moment ratio”
Add large labels
Slide#8: "Study nuclear structure" --> "Study of nuclear structure"
"increase in central" --> "increase in central collisions"
Changed
It is very difficult to read what is plotted on the
Add large labels
Slide#9: Add "More investigation using STAR data is underway”
Added
It is not clear what your conclusion is from the data-model
comparison on the right. Can you please add a short sentence.
Add one more sentence.
Slide#10: "identical for Ru and Zr in final state as expected" -->
"consistent between Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr as expected"
While talking do mention that "as is it driven by final state
effects”
Changed and will follow your nice suggestions.
"variance and skewness" --> You didn't show skewness, maybe say
"variance and third order moment”
We showed the skewness in the right lower plot on slide 8th
Add "more studies underway" in the last bullet.
Added
Best regards
Chunjian
On Oct 23, 2022, at 6:43 PM, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l
<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
Dear ChunJian,
Very nice slides. Here are my comments. With these included, I sign
off.
General comment: some of the fonts you have used are too small.
Side#3:
Define "0\nu\beta\beta" somewhere on this slide.
"Rarely experimental measurements" --> "Few experimental
measurements" or "Rarely explored in experiment"
Slide#4: "based on N_{ch}^{offline} with" --> "based on uncorrected
tracks (N_{ch}^{offline}) in"
Slide#6: Some texts are overlapping, the page number is hidden.
Minor & optional comment: the references are not written in
conventional formats (like Zhang and Jia, PRL 128, 022301 (2022)).
"cancelation" --> "cancellation"
It is not clear what you mean by "cancellation expected in
non-central collisions". What gets cancelled with what? Also, this
is approximately true, right ? Then maybe say "approximate
cancellation"
The 4th bullet is a bit confusing, right? What do you mean by this?
It depends on how the size is defined. Larger neutron skin means
large size, so there's an apparent contradiction between the 3rd and

the 4th bullets.
Slide#7:
"non-linear" --> "Nonlinear" in title and everywhere
"reflect nuclear structure" --> "reflects difference in nuclear
structure"
It's impossible to see what you're plotting on the two right
figures. At least write in bigger fonts that you're plotting "Mean
ratio" and "Third moment ratio"
Slide#8: "Study nuclear structure" --> "Study of nuclear structure"
"increase in central" --> "increase in central collisions"
It is very difficult to read what is plotted on the
Slide#9: Add "More investigation using STAR data is underway"
It is not clear what your conclusion is from the data-model
comparison on the right. Can you please add a short sentence.
Slide#10: "identical for Ru and Zr in final state as expected" -->
"consistent between Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr as expected"
While talking do mention that "as is it driven by final state
effects"
"variance and skewness" --> You didn't show skewness, maybe say
"variance and third order moment"
Add "more studies underway" in the last bullet.
Best,
Pritwish
On 2022-10-14 15:41, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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