STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Zuowen, Priyanshi, Li-ke and Prabhupada,

Very nice abstract! The version 1 is already in a very good shape. The 
first para can be made a bit more cohesive but the current version is 
still effective. Here are some minor comments:

"Equation of State (EoS)"-->"equation of state (EoS)" (I think)

"complementary information" --> "valuable information"


After this line ending with "....transport properties of the medium." 
add a line as follows:
"Studying these flow harmonics for various identified particles at 
different energies provides insights on a medium going through QCD phase 
transition."

"early stage" -->"early stages"

"may provide" --> "making them cleaner probe to provide"


Basically you can change this sentence:
"(Multi-)strange hadrons with small hadronic cross-sections may provide 
information primarily from the early stage of the heavy-ion collisions 
and are
important for the study of the QCD phase diagram at RHIC."
-->
"In particular, multi-strange hadrons with small hadronic cross-sections 
are cleaner probes of the early stages of heavy-ion collisions"


And the following as the last sentence of the first paragraph:
"A comparative study of light and multi-strange hadrons provides 
valuable insights into the subsequent stages of the medium evolution."

For line 10-13, revise the sentence as follows:
In this talk, the measurements of v1,v2 and v3 for both light and 
(multi-)strange hadrons at √sNN = 3.0, 3.2, 3.5, 3.9, 7.7, 9.2, 11.5, 
14.6, and 19.6 GeV , utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR 
detector and enhanced statistics datasets from the second phase of the 
RHIC beam energy scan (BES-II) program, will be presented.



Best,
Prithwish




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