STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Zuowen Liu" <liuzw AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Prithwish and All,

Thank you for your detailed suggestion.

I have modified the word, please find the updated one by the link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_Flow_Merged_0.pdf

Best regards,

Zuowen

 

 

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From:  "Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Sun, Apr 23, 2023 11:35 AM

To:  "star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Zuowen Liu for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Zuowen and all,
  Thank you for taking my comments into consideration. Could you please
make the following modification to avoid repeating the word "enhanced":

"utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR detector and enhanced
statistics datasets"

-->

"utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR detector and increased
statistics datasets"

Best,
Prithwish




On 2023-04-22 21:53, Zuowen Liu wrote:
> Dear Prithwish and All,
>
> Thank you so much for your nice suggestions.
> After re-shaping the abstract, the logic of abstract is more clear and
> the focus is more prominent.
>
> Kindly find the updated version by the link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_Flow_Merged_0.pdf
>
> Thanks and Best regards,
> Zuowen
>
> ------------------ Original ------------------
>
> From:  "Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> Date:  Sun, Apr 23, 2023 03:28 AM
> To:  "star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>
> Subject:  Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Zuowen Liu for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Dear Zuowen, Priyanshi, Li-ke and Prabhupada,
>
> Very nice abstract! The version 1 is already in a very good shape. The
>
> first para can be made a bit more cohesive but the current version is
> still effective. Here are some minor comments:
>
> "Equation of State (EoS)"-->"equation of state (EoS)" (I think)
>
> "complementary information" --> "valuable information"
>
> After this line ending with "....transport properties of the medium."
> add a line as follows:
> "Studying these flow harmonics for various identified particles at
> different energies provides insights on a medium going through QCD
> phase
> transition."
>
> "early stage" -->"early stages"
>
> "may provide" --> "making them cleaner probe to provide"
>
> Basically you can change this sentence:
> "(Multi-)strange hadrons with small hadronic cross-sections may
> provide
> information primarily from the early stage of the heavy-ion collisions
>
> and are
> important for the study of the QCD phase diagram at RHIC."
> -->
> "In particular, multi-strange hadrons with small hadronic
> cross-sections
> are cleaner probes of the early stages of heavy-ion collisions"
>
> And the following as the last sentence of the first paragraph:
> "A comparative study of light and multi-strange hadrons provides
> valuable insights into the subsequent stages of the medium evolution."
>
> For line 10-13, revise the sentence as follows:
> In this talk, the measurements of v1,v2 and v3 for both light and
> (multi-)strange hadrons at √sNN = 3.0, 3.2, 3.5, 3.9, 7.7, 9.2,
> 11.5,
> 14.6, and 19.6 GeV , utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR
> detector and enhanced statistics datasets from the second phase of the
>
> RHIC beam energy scan (BES-II) program, will be presented.
>
> Best,
> Prithwish
>
> On 2023-04-16 23:25, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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>>
>> Zuowen Liu (liuzw AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
>> review,
>> please have a look:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63392
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