STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[sharangrav <sharangrav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for your valuable comments. I have incorporated the comments 
in the abstract and hereby sharing the link to the updated version.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio

There was a page restriction so I have tried to keep everything under 2 
page. Please let me know if you have further comments.

Thanks and regards,
Sharang

On 2024-09-06 13:39, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material
> originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (
> sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
>
> Comment:
> Dear Sharang,
>
> Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below.
>
> Please include line numbers.
>
> Introduction:
> "At these energies, --> "At these lower energies,
>
> "This leads to a significant influence .... flow harmonics" --> This 
> results
> in a significant influence of the shadowing effect, where passing 
> spectator
> nucleons obstruct the interaction region, thereby affecting the 
> measured flow
> observables.
>
> net-kaon, net-proton --> you could add definition for net-kaon and
> net-proton, either here or in next section. It is not a particle 
> itself, but
> constructed from particle and antiparticle's v1.
>
> = 3.2 – 4.5 GeV --> Specify each beam energies reported
>
> Analysis Details:
> "Mass-squared (m2)" --> Moreover, mass-squared (m2) information from 
> TOF
>
> "The reaction plane angle is estimated by the event plane method using 
> Event
> Plane Detector (EPD) within" --> The event plane angle, a proxy for the
> reaction plane angle, is reconstructed using the Event Plane Detector 
> (EPD),
> which has coverage ...
>
> "3 eta sub-events" --> 3 η-sub events, (also indicate the sub-event 
> ranges)
>
> Results:
> "with increasing rapidity for all particle" --> with increasing 
> rapidity for
> all particles
> "is attributed" --> can be attributed
>
> "The net-kaon dv1/dy .... 19.6 GeV" --> The net-kaon dv1dy trend shows 
> a
> minimum between sqrt{s_{NN}} = 4.5 and 7.7 GeV, which happens at lower
> collision energies than for net-protons, where the minimum is found 
> between
> sqrt{s_{NN}} = 11.5 and 19.6 GeV [7].
>
> Reference [7] and [1] is same, please correct it
>
> I sign off with these addressed.
>
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