STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[sharangrav <sharangrav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

I have updated my abstract. If there are no further comments can we 
proceed further for the approval.
Link to updated abstract: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio

Thanks and regards,
Sharang

On 2024-09-06 16:50, sharangrav wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thank you for your valuable comments. I have incorporated the comments
> in the abstract and hereby sharing the link to the updated version.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
>
> There was a page restriction so I have tried to keep everything under
> 2 page. Please let me know if you have further comments.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Sharang
>
> On 2024-09-06 13:39, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a 
> > material
> > originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (
> > sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
> >
> > Comment:
> > Dear Sharang,
> >
> > Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below.
> >
> > Please include line numbers.
> >
> > Introduction:
> > "At these energies, --> "At these lower energies,
> >
> > "This leads to a significant influence .... flow harmonics" --> This 
> > results
> > in a significant influence of the shadowing effect, where passing 
> > spectator
> > nucleons obstruct the interaction region, thereby affecting the 
> > measured flow
> > observables.
> >
> > net-kaon, net-proton --> you could add definition for net-kaon and
> > net-proton, either here or in next section. It is not a particle 
> > itself, but
> > constructed from particle and antiparticle's v1.
> >
> > = 3.2 – 4.5 GeV --> Specify each beam energies reported
> >
> > Analysis Details:
> > "Mass-squared (m2)" --> Moreover, mass-squared (m2) information from 
> > TOF
> >
> > "The reaction plane angle is estimated by the event plane method using 
> > Event
> > Plane Detector (EPD) within" --> The event plane angle, a proxy for 
> > the
> > reaction plane angle, is reconstructed using the Event Plane Detector 
> > (EPD),
> > which has coverage ...
> >
> > "3 eta sub-events" --> 3 η-sub events, (also indicate the sub-event 
> > ranges)
> >
> > Results:
> > "with increasing rapidity for all particle" --> with increasing 
> > rapidity for
> > all particles
> > "is attributed" --> can be attributed
> >
> > "The net-kaon dv1/dy .... 19.6 GeV" --> The net-kaon dv1dy trend shows 
> > a
> > minimum between sqrt{s_{NN}} = 4.5 and 7.7 GeV, which happens at lower
> > collision energies than for net-protons, where the minimum is found 
> > between
> > sqrt{s_{NN}} = 11.5 and 19.6 GeV [7].
> >
> > Reference [7] and [1] is same, please correct it
> >
> > I sign off with these addressed.
> >
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