STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[sharangrav <sharangrav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Richard,

Thank you very much for your comments.
Yes systematic and statistical error and plotted but are within the 
marker size. I have now added a a line for that in the text as well.
Here is the link to my updated abstract: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio

Please let me know if there are further comments and if not can we 
proceed further for the approval since the deadline is approaching.

Thanks and regards,
Sharang


On 2024-09-11 01:06, Richard Seto wrote:
> Hi Sharang
> Minor gramatical stuff except last question.
> Page 1 2nd column
>
> Par 0 L1-  TPC -> The TPC
> L5 TOF -> the TOF
> L6  delete “by putting an appropriate restriction on its value”
>
> Par 1
> L1 “Net particle represents” -> “Net particle refers to “
> L20 kill “trend”
> L21 kill “which happens”
>
> In the last sentence - You talk about a comparison with JAM. Is it on
> the figures?
> It not you will have to say (not shown) after “Jam model”
>
> Are there systematic errors on the points, and are they smaller than
> the points. If so, you should stay that.
>
> -Rich
>
>
>
> Richard Seto
> richard.seto AT ucr.edu
> Department of Physics and Astronomy
> University of California, Riverside
> Riverside, CA 92521
>
>
>
> > On Sep 9, 2024, at 9:34 PM, sharangrav <sharangrav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> 
> > wrote:
> >
> > Dear Subhash,
> >
> > I have updated my abstract. If there are no further comments can we 
> > proceed further for the approval.
> > Link to updated abstract: 
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Sharang
> >
> > On 2024-09-06 16:50, sharangrav wrote:
> > > Dear Subhash,
> > > Thank you for your valuable comments. I have incorporated the 
> > > comments
> > > in the abstract and hereby sharing the link to the updated version.
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
> > > There was a page restriction so I have tried to keep everything under
> > > 2 page. Please let me know if you have further comments.
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Sharang
> > > On 2024-09-06 13:39, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a 
> > > > material
> > > > originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (
> > > > sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio
> > > > Comment:
> > > > Dear Sharang,
> > > > Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below.
> > > > Please include line numbers.
> > > > Introduction:
> > > > "At these energies, --> "At these lower energies,
> > > > "This leads to a significant influence .... flow harmonics" --> This 
> > > > results
> > > > in a significant influence of the shadowing effect, where passing 
> > > > spectator
> > > > nucleons obstruct the interaction region, thereby affecting the 
> > > > measured flow
> > > > observables.
> > > > net-kaon, net-proton --> you could add definition for net-kaon and
> > > > net-proton, either here or in next section. It is not a particle 
> > > > itself, but
> > > > constructed from particle and antiparticle's v1.
> > > > = 3.2 – 4.5 GeV --> Specify each beam energies reported
> > > > Analysis Details:
> > > > "Mass-squared (m2)" --> Moreover, mass-squared (m2) information from 
> > > > TOF
> > > > "The reaction plane angle is estimated by the event plane method 
> > > > using Event
> > > > Plane Detector (EPD) within" --> The event plane angle, a proxy for 
> > > > the
> > > > reaction plane angle, is reconstructed using the Event Plane 
> > > > Detector (EPD),
> > > > which has coverage ...
> > > > "3 eta sub-events" --> 3 η-sub events, (also indicate the sub-event 
> > > > ranges)
> > > > Results:
> > > > "with increasing rapidity for all particle" --> with increasing 
> > > > rapidity for
> > > > all particles
> > > > "is attributed" --> can be attributed
> > > > "The net-kaon dv1/dy .... 19.6 GeV" --> The net-kaon dv1dy trend 
> > > > shows a
> > > > minimum between sqrt{s_{NN}} = 4.5 and 7.7 GeV, which happens at 
> > > > lower
> > > > collision energies than for net-protons, where the minimum is found 
> > > > between
> > > > sqrt{s_{NN}} = 11.5 and 19.6 GeV [7].
> > > > Reference [7] and [1] is same, please correct it
> > > > I sign off with these addressed.
> > > > ---
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