STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for your comments!
I've incorporated them into new version of proceedings: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69917

Also I can't see your comment on drupal on my submission, is that okay?

Best,
Egor Alpatov

On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 10:22 AM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Egor Alpatov ( egroker1 AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICPPA-2024/Global-polarization-Xi-hyperons-AuAu-collisions-STAR-experimant-1

Comment:
Dear Egor, Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions:

Title: you could either make it shorter, something like: Measurement of Xi 
global polarization in RHIC Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions, or if you 
prefer the current one, then it might be: "Centrality, pseudorapidity, and 
transverse momentum dependence of the global polarization of Ξ hyperons in 
Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions by STAR"

abstract: In these proceedings, we report
"While lambda global polarization .... in heavy-ion collisions" --> can be a 
summary of your observation, here is my attempt: "The global polarization of 
Ξ hyperons exhibits a trend comparable to that of Λ and is consistent with 
predictions from transport model calculations. This observation reinforces 
the idea of global nature of hyperon polarization in heavy-ion collisions."

line-10: a framework for --> conditions suitable for

line-48: this --> these

line-87: track reconstruction efficiency

I sign-off with these taken into consideration.

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