STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Egor,

Thanks for incorporating my suggestions. I don't see them either, but 
that's probably okay. I have few additional minor suggestions:

in abstract: In this talk, --> In these proceedings,
line-11: "offer a conditions" -->  offer conditions
line-119: "Results stay within experimental trend .... " --> These 
measurements of Xi polarization align with the global trends observed 
for hyperon polarization and are consistent with theoretical 
predictions.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2024-11-18 04:16 PM, Egor Alpatov wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thank you for your comments!
> I've incorporated them into new version of proceedings:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69917
>
> Also I can't see your comment on drupal on my submission, is that
> okay?
>
> Best,
> Egor Alpatov
>
> On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 10:22 AM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a
> > material
> > originally submitted by Egor Alpatov ( egroker1 AT gmail.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICPPA-2024/Global-polarization-Xi-hyperons-AuAu-collisions-STAR-experimant-1
> > Comment:
> > Dear Egor, Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions:
> >
> > Title: you could either make it shorter, something like: Measurement
> > of Xi
> > global polarization in RHIC Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions, or if
> > you
> > prefer the current one, then it might be: "Centrality,
> > pseudorapidity, and
> > transverse momentum dependence of the global polarization of Ξ
> > hyperons in
> > Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions by STAR"
> >
> > abstract: In these proceedings, we report
> > "While lambda global polarization .... in heavy-ion collisions" -->
> > can be a
> > summary of your observation, here is my attempt: "The global
> > polarization of
> > Ξ hyperons exhibits a trend comparable to that of Λ and is
> > consistent with
> > predictions from transport model calculations. This observation
> > reinforces
> > the idea of global nature of hyperon polarization in heavy-ion
> > collisions."
> >
> > line-10: a framework for --> conditions suitable for
> >
> > line-48: this --> these
> >
> > line-87: track reconstruction efficiency
> >
> > I sign-off with these taken into consideration.
> >
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