STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thanks for these comments, I implemented them too: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ICPPA_2024_Proceedings_Egor_v3.pdf

Best,
Egor

On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 11:35 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Egor,

Thanks for incorporating my suggestions. I don't see them either, but
that's probably okay. I have few additional minor suggestions:

in abstract: In this talk, --> In these proceedings,
line-11: "offer a conditions" -->  offer conditions
line-119: "Results stay within experimental trend .... " --> These
measurements of Xi polarization align with the global trends observed
for hyperon polarization and are consistent with theoretical
predictions.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2024-11-18 04:16 PM, Egor Alpatov wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thank you for your comments!
> I've incorporated them into new version of proceedings:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69917
>
> Also I can't see your comment on drupal on my submission, is that
> okay?
>
> Best,
> Egor Alpatov
>
> On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 10:22 AM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>
>> Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a
>> material
>> originally submitted by Egor Alpatov ( egroker1 AT gmail.com ) at
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICPPA-2024/Global-polarization-Xi-hyperons-AuAu-collisions-STAR-experimant-1
>>
>> Comment:
>> Dear Egor, Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions:
>>
>> Title: you could either make it shorter, something like: Measurement
>> of Xi
>> global polarization in RHIC Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions, or if
>> you
>> prefer the current one, then it might be: "Centrality,
>> pseudorapidity, and
>> transverse momentum dependence of the global polarization of Ξ
>> hyperons in
>> Beam Energy Scan Au+Au collisions by STAR"
>>
>> abstract: In these proceedings, we report
>> "While lambda global polarization .... in heavy-ion collisions" -->
>> can be a
>> summary of your observation, here is my attempt: "The global
>> polarization of
>> Ξ hyperons exhibits a trend comparable to that of Λ and is
>> consistent with
>> predictions from transport model calculations. This observation
>> reinforces
>> the idea of global nature of hyperon polarization in heavy-ion
>> collisions."
>>
>> line-10: a framework for --> conditions suitable for
>>
>> line-48: this --> these
>>
>> line-87: track reconstruction efficiency
>>
>> I sign-off with these taken into consideration.
>>
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