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[Derek Anderson <derekwigwam9 AT tamu.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks! I've implemented your suggestion at:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonPoster_AUM2022.v3_1.pdf

 -- Derek

On Fri, Jun 3, 2022 at 10:00 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Derek, With one following suggestion, I sign off. One suggestion on your title: "Semi-inclusive measurements of 𝝅𝟎+jet and 𝜸𝐝𝐢𝐫+jet in 𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 collisions at the STAR experiment and their impact on measurements of medium-induced modification"

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Hi Derek,

With one following suggestion, I sign off.

One suggestion on your title:
"Semi-inclusive measurements of 𝝅𝟎+jet and 𝜸𝐝𝐢𝐫+jet in
𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 collisions at the STAR experiment and
their impact on measurements of medium-induced modification"

->
"Semi-inclusive measurements of 𝝅𝟎+jet and 𝜸𝐝𝐢𝐫+jet in
𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 collisions and
their impact on measurements of medium-induced modification at the STAR 
experiment"


Best of luck for your thesis poster presentation.

Regards,
Nihar

On 2022-06-04 03:36, Derek Anderson wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
> 
> Thank you for the feedback! I have implemented your suggestions in the
> version linked to below, and have a few responses in-lined below as
> well.
> 
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>> Cosmetic suggestion: using these colorful cones at the bottom may
> confuse people as it may indicate also jet cone. So you need to use a
> different style to show "shower shape" by pi0 and gamma.
> 
> That's a good point! If I have some time, I'll experiment with some
> other ways of representing this, but -- given the late hour -- I may
> not have the time...
> 
>> "Observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening" -> "First
> observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening in heavy-ion
> collisions"
> 
> In my implementation, I left out "first" because I don't think that's
> quite true... As has been pointed out, STAR has observed
> medium-induced broadening before (c.f. Alice Ohlson's jet-hadron
> correlations).
> 
>  -- Derek
> 
> On Wed, Jun 1, 2022 at 11:05 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
> 
>> Hello Derek, Please find my comment and suggestions below on your
>> nice presentation slides: It is advised to follow the guidance for
>> using roman vs. italic style of symbols.
>> 
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>> Hello Derek,
>> 
>> Please find my comment and suggestions below on your nice
>> presentation
>> slides:
>> 
>> It is advised to follow the guidance for using roman vs. italic
>> style of
>> symbols.
>> 
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>> Note: it should be written as $p$+$p$ and $p$+Au, etc, which is
>> different from the guidance
>> 
>> Slide#1
>> I think you could change your title:
>> "Reconstruction of neutral-triggered recoil jets in
>> 𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 at the STAR experiment"
>> ->
>> How about
>> "Measurement of semi-inclusive pi0+jet and gamma+jet in p+p
>> collisions
>> at
>> 𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV and its impact on heavy-ion measurement in
>> STAR"
>> Or similar to this
>> (Because your p+p analysis is important for drawing conclusion that
>> you
>> show on your last slide; and you can make a link from your title
>> And people can wait until your last slide to know what is that
>> impact)
>> 
>> Slide#2:
>> "Direct photon constrains kinematics of recoil jet" It is not clear;
>> can
>> you please elaborate or paraphrase?
>> 
>> Slide#3
>> Please mention what are these E_cluster, e_i, and r_i in this TSP
>> formula?
>> Similarly, define all terms in direct photon yield formula below.
>> (People may be interested to know)
>> 
>> "E_cluster" -> "cluster" should be roman as it is a label and has no
>> 
>> value.
>> 
>> Cosmetic suggestion: using these colorful cones at the bottom may
>> confuse people as it may indicate also jet cone. So you need to use
>> a
>> different style to show "shower shape" by pi0 and gamma.
>> 
>> Slide#4
>> 
>> k_T -> make "T" roman style
>> "- With R = 0.2, 0.5" -> you can add this with upper sentence and
>> remove
>> "-" (Better reading in one go)
>> "UE effects small in 𝑝+ 𝑝" -> "Negligible effect of UE in p+p"
>> 
>> It would be better to add one sentence mentioning difference between
>> 
>> Pt^reco, Pt^raw, and Pt^ch (which is x-axis in the upper plots). I
>> understand this is difficult in limited space, for audience it is
>> probably good to add.
>> 
>> SLide#5
>> "Different q/g fractions, path length distribution" -> I would
>> prefer to
>> drop this. Only upper bullet is Ok (" pi0 and gamma +jet iAA
>> consistent"
>> as you mentioned)
>> 
>> "…due to jet shape in vacuum"  -> "… due to vacuum parton shower
>> "
>> 
>> "Au+Au suppressed relative to 𝑝+𝑝" -> "R^0.2/0.5 in Au+Au less
>> than that
>> in p+p collisions"
>> "Observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening" -> "First
>> observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening in heavy-ion
>> collisions"
>> 
>> Regards
>> Nihar
>> 
>> On 2022-06-02 02:54, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>> 
>>> Apologies for the tardiness on this, but I've been invited to
>> present
>>> a poster virtually at the RHIC/AGS Annual User's Meeting (June 7th
>> -
>>> 10th). The content of the slides is identical to what I presented
>> at
>>> Quark Matter 2022, but pared down to focus on the pp side of the
>>> analysis and the yield ratios. Minor edits to the text here and
>> there
>>> have been made to reflect the narrowing of scope. Comments and
>>> questions are more than welcome!
>>> 
>>> Thanks!
>>> Derek
>>> 
>>> On Wed, Jun 1, 2022 at 3:21 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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>>>> Derek Anderson (dmawxc AT physics.tamu.edu) has submitted a material
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>>>> review, please have a look:
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