STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Barbara,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract on HF measurements.


1_ "…the early stage of heavy-ion ultra-relativistic heavy-ion 
collisions…" -> "the early stage of ultra-relativistic heavy-ion 
collisions…"
(Here "ultra" is optional you may consider to drop it)
2_ "..the whole medium evolution" -> AT this point you have not 
introduced yet what is this medium (that is QGP). Hence you may need to 
introduce the QGP medium before.
3_ "Therefore, …the properties of the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP) produced 
in these collisions. Please try to introduce QGP before and then 2_ 
should come next.
4_ "Quarkonium studies in p + p and p+Au collisions provide us not only 
with the necessary baseline for Au+Au collisions, but help to understand 
the quarkonium production mechanisms and the cold nuclear matter 
effects, respectively.
" -> "On the other hand, the quarkonium measurements in p + p and p+Au 
collisions not only help to understand their production mechanisms and 
the cold nuclear matter effects but also set the necessary baseline for 
Au+Au collisions.
5_ "…production provide us information on transport properties…" -> 
"…production provide information on the transport properties…"
6_"… degree of the heavy quark thermalization and the hadronization 
mechanism." -> "the degree of the heavy quark thermalization, and the 
hadronization mechanism."
7_ "We will show measurements of the J/ψ suppression and elliptic flow 
in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV and studies of 
system size and energy dependence of the J/ψ production." -> I would 
prefer  to rephrase the sentence something like "The system size and 
energy dependence of the J/ψ production, and its suppression and 
elliptic flow in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV 
will be discussed."
(Just to avoid "we will" again)
8_ "…D_S and Λ_C…" -> " …D_S, and Λ_C…"
9_ cross section -> cross-section
10_ "…will be also reported." -> "…will also be reported."
11_"We will also present the first measurements of…" -> "The first 
measurements of…200 GeV will be presented."
12_ At the end you may consider to include STAR's plan for heavy-flavor 
measurement in upcoming (Run23-25) data taking. something like
"Finally, I plan to shed light on the future data-taking plan for 
precision and their kinematic coverage of heavy flavor measurements in 
the STAR experiment."



Regards,
Nihar

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