STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar, Sooraj,

thanks for additional comments.

I've updated the abstract.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Jun 20, 2022 at 5:03 PM Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

   Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. Please find some comments from me below. 

L4: I think at this point we can state, 'Ultra relativistic heavy-ion collisions create a dense and ...'

L8: A suggestion, may be the open heavy flavor part on L13 goes better immediately after 'probing the whole medium evolution'. Quarkonia probing the color screening and thermodynamic properties could come after as a separate point.

L10: effect --> mechanism, which causes the quarkonia bound states to dissociate in the QGP,

L19: J/Psi production --> J/Psi suppression?

L21: results on --> measurements of?

L23: the part staring 'that conclude ...' can be removed

L27: D0 tagged jets and their radial profiles 

L29: by STAR will be discussed

thanks

Sooraj

On Mon, Jun 20, 2022 at 9:47 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Barbara,

Thank you for implementing my last comments.
Please find my additional comments below.

LIne#4: "In ultra-relativistic heavy-ion collisions creation a dense and
hot medium  … is expected." -> "In ultra-relativistic heavy-ion
collisions, a dense and hot medium… is created."

Line#5: "…a dense and hot medium with partonic degrees of freedom,
called the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP),…" -> "…a dense and hot Quantum
Chromodynamics medium with the color degrees of freedom, called the
Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP), …" (Here "dense and hot medium" is the QCD
medium; you mean "color degrees of freedom" here).

Line#12: "…not only…, but help…,respectively." -> The syntax of this
sentence needs a bit of improvement. Suggestion: use "and" with
",respectively." in this sentence. Otherwise, use "not only…but…"
without "respectively" here.


Regards,
Nihar




On 2022-06-20 02:11, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> thank you for your useful comments.
> I've updated the abstract.
> And sorry for multiple posts, the current version is under:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2022/Recent-heavy-flavor-results-STAR
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Sun, Jun 19, 2022 at 4:59 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hello Barbara,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract on HF measurements.
>>
>> 1_ "…the early stage of heavy-ion ultra-relativistic heavy-ion
>> collisions…" -> "the early stage of ultra-relativistic heavy-ion
>> collisions…"
>> (Here "ultra" is optional you may consider to drop it)
>> 2_ "..the whole medium evolution" -> AT this point you have not
>> introduced yet what is this medium (that is QGP). Hence you may need
>> to
>> introduce the QGP medium before.
>> 3_ "Therefore, …the properties of the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP)
>> produced
>> in these collisions. Please try to introduce QGP before and then 2_
>> should come next.
>> 4_ "Quarkonium studies in p + p and p+Au collisions provide us not
>> only
>> with the necessary baseline for Au+Au collisions, but help to
>> understand
>> the quarkonium production mechanisms and the cold nuclear matter
>> effects, respectively.
>> " -> "On the other hand, the quarkonium measurements in p + p and
>> p+Au
>> collisions not only help to understand their production mechanisms
>> and
>> the cold nuclear matter effects but also set the necessary baseline
>> for
>> Au+Au collisions.
>> 5_ "…production provide us information on transport properties…"
>> ->
>> "…production provide information on the transport properties…"
>> 6_"… degree of the heavy quark thermalization and the
>> hadronization
>> mechanism." -> "the degree of the heavy quark thermalization, and
>> the
>> hadronization mechanism."
>> 7_ "We will show measurements of the J/ψ suppression and elliptic
>> flow
>> in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV and
>> studies of
>> system size and energy dependence of the J/ψ production." -> I
>> would
>> prefer  to rephrase the sentence something like "The system size and
>>
>> energy dependence of the J/ψ production, and its suppression and
>> elliptic flow in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200
>> GeV
>> will be discussed."
>> (Just to avoid "we will" again)
>> 8_ "…D_S and Λ_C…" -> " …D_S, and Λ_C…"
>> 9_ cross section -> cross-section
>> 10_ "…will be also reported." -> "…will also be reported."
>> 11_"We will also present the first measurements of…" -> "The first
>>
>> measurements of…200 GeV will be presented."
>> 12_ At the end you may consider to include STAR's plan for
>> heavy-flavor
>> measurement in upcoming (Run23-25) data taking. something like
>> "Finally, I plan to shed light on the future data-taking plan for
>> precision and their kinematic coverage of heavy flavor measurements
>> in
>> the STAR experiment."
>>
>> Regards,
>> Nihar
>>
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Sooraj Radhakrishnan

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Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44243

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
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