STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Diptanil,

I would suggest to submit your abstract based on QM2022 preliminary 
results at DNP without promising a lot. I find your current preliminary 
results are important and interesting to draw attention of the audience.

Besides, please find my comments on your nice abstract.

"Mentor: Dr. Sevil Salur" -> you can drop it, not required;
line#1 "Partons (quarks/gluons)… " -> "		Partons, i.e., quarks or 
gluons, ….
Line#5"…quarks (such as charm and bottom) at low …" -> "…quarks, such as 
charm and bottom, at low …"
Line#10 "…mesons at low with high significance, …" -> "…mesons at low 
$p_{\rm T} with high significance of signal over the background."
You could drop "making STAR ideal for similar measurements."; this is 
not required.

On second pare:
I would suggest to concentrate only on QM2022 results without promising 
too much. As we have not seen D^0 lower pT results so far which may need 
a detailed discussion. So please modify this para based on your QM2022 
results (D^0 pT > 5 GeV) with existing STAR preliminary.

R_CP -> $R_{\rm CP}$  (here "CP" is a label and no value, so is roman)

Cheers
Nihar



On 2022-06-24 01:20, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi everyone, please find my contribution for DNP 2022 in the link
> above. The abstract is more or less similar to the approved one for
> Quark Matter 2022, with some changes to reflect the already presented
> results. Thank you.
>
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