STAR HardProbes PWG

[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Dear Yi,

Thank you very much for your useful comments, I've implemented them in v3 on Drupal page.

Best regards,

Monika

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uľivatele Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: 20. července 2022 4:34:38
Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov; STAR HardProbes PWG
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Dear Monika, 

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L29: C/A --> Cambridge/Aachen (C/A)

 - L29: get angular ordered tree --> get the angular ordered tree

 - L33: "where" shouldn't have "indent" 

 - L34: jet and Rg distance --> jet, and Rg is the distance 

 - L35: in the Eq. 1 --> in Eq. 1

 - L39: Move this sentence after the previous one (not a separate one).  

 - L45: in [5] --> in Ref. [5]

 - L64: second and third split --> second, and third split

 - L72: ath --> at

 - L78: from first --> from the first 

 - L84: second and third --> second, and third 

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Jul 20, 2022 at 5:59 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a 
review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60343

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