STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Monika,

Thank you for implementing my comments. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-07-22 16:15, Monika Robotková wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and
> uploaded v4 on Drupal page.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Monika
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Nihar
> Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: 22. července 2022 7:46:49
> Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov; STAR HardProbes PWG
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review
>
> Hello Monika,
>
> Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.
>
> L15, radius or split -> radius, or split …
> L16, (R_g) and the QCD - > R_g), and the QCD
> L17, the first split for jets of varying -> the first split of jets at
>
> varying
> L25: ChromoDynamics -> Chromodynamics
> L28: "in our analysis." -> "in this measurement."
> L47: "finite resolution of the detector"  Not only fine resolution but
>
> also tracking efficiency. So I would suggest to use "by the detector
> effects such as  detector efficiency and pT-resolution,…" or
> something
> similar.
> L48: "          true particle-level spectra " -> "the true
> particle-level
> spectra "
> L57: Please mention what are dominating systematic uncertainties?
> L62 "3. Evolution of the splitting kinematics as we travel along the
> jet
>  shower " -> How about this "Evolution of the splitting kinematics
> along
> the jet shower"
> L83:"  In this proceedings we " -> "In this proceedings, we…"
> L86: "          that selecting on Rg at the first split " -> " that
> the
> selection of R_g at the first split…"
>
> Change "template " and "TEMPLETE" at the top.
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
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