STAR HardProbes PWG

[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Hello Nihar,

Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v4 on Drupal page.

Best regards,

Monika

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Odesláno: 22. července 2022 7:46:49
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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.

L15, radius or split -> radius, or split …
L16, (R_g) and the QCD - > R_g), and the QCD
L17, the first split for jets of varying -> the first split of jets at
varying
L25: ChromoDynamics -> Chromodynamics
L28: "in our analysis." -> "in this measurement."
L47: "finite resolution of the detector"  Not only fine resolution but
also tracking efficiency. So I would suggest to use "by the detector
effects such as  detector efficiency and pT-resolution,…" or something
similar.
L48: "          true particle-level spectra " -> "the true particle-level
spectra "
L57: Please mention what are dominating systematic uncertainties?
L62 "3. Evolution of the splitting kinematics as we travel along the jet
 shower " -> How about this "Evolution of the splitting kinematics along
the jet shower"
L83:"  In this proceedings we " -> "In this proceedings, we…"
L86: "          that selecting on Rg at the first split " -> " that the
selection of R_g at the first split…"

Change "template " and "TEMPLETE" at the top.


Cheers
Nihar

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