STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.

L15, radius or split -> radius, or split …
L16, (R_g) and the QCD - > R_g), and the QCD
L17, the first split for jets of varying -> the first split of jets at 
varying
L25: ChromoDynamics -> Chromodynamics
L28: "in our analysis." -> "in this measurement."
L47: "finite resolution of the detector"  Not only fine resolution but 
also tracking efficiency. So I would suggest to use "by the detector 
effects such as  detector efficiency and pT-resolution,…" or something 
similar.
L48: "		true particle-level spectra " -> "the true particle-level 
spectra "
L57: Please mention what are dominating systematic uncertainties?
L62 "3. Evolution of the splitting kinematics as we travel along the jet 
 shower " -> How about this "Evolution of the splitting kinematics along 
the jet shower"
L83:"  In this proceedings we " -> "In this proceedings, we…"
L86: "		that selecting on Rg at the first split " -> " that the 
selection of R_g at the first split…"

Change "template " and "TEMPLETE" at the top.


Cheers
Nihar

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