STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments below  on your nice presentation slides.

Slide#4
Anti-Kt, Cambridge/Aachen -> please give references (although it is know 
to all)

Slide#7
_Right side ATLAS plot: Not sure if there is any relevance to show 
ATLAS's this plots.
If you want to emphasis on Jet substructure pQCD and non-pQCD 
discussion, you could include STAR's jet M, Rg, Zg, etc., results.
Is there anything you want to point out here that I missed?

_On Bullet p+p Collisions, I think it is important to mention the 
physics why in p+p collision it is important to study jet substructure 
observable?  That is "to study vacuum QCD shower at RHIC energy"  along 
with "comparison with QCD predictions and tuning of MC generator" are 
other motivations.

_Fourth bullet is redundant, you can remove it. As in p+p collisions you 
already mention this (see above comment)

Slide#8:
_On right plot, what do you want to say here? What is the relevance to 
your presentation and results? Do you have plan to do similar 
measurement in Au+Au in STAR?

Slide#9:
_A bit confuse with the text.
"To ways how to…" -> do you want to say "Two ways to study…" or "Ways to 
study parton shower…"

Slide#11
_Reconstruction of charged particle tracks -> "Charged particle 
identification for jet reconstruction"
_Reconstruction of neutral component… -> "Detection of neutral particles 
for jet reconstruction"
_"Segmentation" -> Granularity
_ "Resolution parameters" -> "Jet resolution parameters:"
_"Located at the RHIC…" ->"Located at RHIC…"

Slide#13:
_"… and obtain particle-level distribution" -> "and obtain true 
(particle-level) distribution"
_"… pT,jet bit…" -> pT,jet bin,

Slide#17-18:
Do you have plan to include any of PYTHIA MC results for these data?


Cheers
Nihar






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