STAR HardProbes PWG

[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Hi Barbara,

Thank you very much for your useful comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v2 on Drupal page.

Best regards,

Monika

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uľivatele Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: 1. října 2022 15:54:56
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Hot Quarks 2022 submitted for review

 

Hi Monika,

very nice slides. Please find below my comments/suggestions for your consideration.

Cheers,

Barbara

- s4: for completeness, add what is d_ij below the picture

- s4: ideal to be used to resolve -> ideal for resolving

- s7,8: I would make one slide (e.g. you can remove s8). I guess you want to show examples of pp and AA cases for jet substructure studies, but I would suggest being brief on this. You have nice results to show, I think it's better to spend more time on them. I would even show more of the results in this presentation.

- s12: reduce font of the reference

- s12: do you need a bullet with STAR references ? If it's important for your story, it's fine. Otherwise, I would spend more time on explaining the groomed observables.

- s13: Measurements affected -> Measurements are affected (to match style of the rest of the text)

- s13: It's hard here to quickly understand the procedure. The thirst and fourth bullets repeat some information. I would try to make them simpler, something like: 

   - Results are in 3D: z_g vs. R_g vs. p_T,jet

   - We unfold z_g vs R_g in 2D  via interactive Bayesian unfolding using RooUnfold in particle-level pT,jet bins 

   - Correction for p_T,jets is applied: For each particle-level pT,jet bin, we do projection ... 

- s14: here some conclusion is missing. You say about smearing and hierarchy modification, but don't say if and how you correct for this.

- s17: conclusions about z_g dependence on R_g is missing (e.g.  R g have steeper z g)

- s18: can we make a conclusion that collinear emissions are enhanced when going from 1st to 3rd split ?

- s18: The plots are separate, and so both need the "STAR Preliminary" label and legends. Unless you can make them side-by-side in a clever way.

- It would be nice to add comparison with MC

On Wed, Sep 28, 2022 at 10:55 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a 
review, please have a look:
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