STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Derek,

Please find a few comments on your nice proceedings.
As this is similar to your QM2022 proceedings, hence no major comments 
on the interpretation and wording.

Abstract:
E_T (E_T^trig) -> Remove (E_T^trig); it is not needed in the abstract.
L14: "the parton showers are modified (jet quenching)[]" -> "the parton 
showers are modified in the medium—the phenomenon is known as jet 
quenching[]."
L21: "direct photons " -> do you need to make it italic?
L25: "direct photons are color…" -> Since the $\gamma_dir$ is color … 
(as already $\gamma_dir$  in L21)
L31: and mean path length -> and the mean path length
L43-44: "…a certain threshold in energy." ->"…a certain threshold in 
transverse energy."
L60: The residual jet 𝑝T … -> The residual jet transverse momentum 
(𝑝T)-smearing …"
L67: …that Δ𝜙 smearing… -> …that the Δ𝜙 smearing…

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-10-15 00:46, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
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> Please find my proceedings for ICHEP 2022 in the message below! The
> content is identical to the QM 2022 proceedings (aside from some
> slight rewording here and there) since the slides were essentially
> identical between the two conferences. Just like QM, proceedings for
> parallel talks are limited to 6 pages, and are due October 31st. Let
> me know if you have any comments or suggestions!
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