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[Derek Anderson <derekwigwam9 AT tamu.edu>]

Hi Nihar and Sooraj,

Thanks for the feedback! I've implemented all of your suggestions in the link below, Nihar, and I've in-lined a response below, Sooraj. I also incorporated some comments from the referee at APPB which were relevant to these proceedings. Namely:

• Reference #5 has been fixed,
• Removed the "see the slides accompanying these proceedings" parenthetical, and
• Changed "this work funded" to "this work is funded" in the acknowledgements.
  

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonDerek_ProceedingsICHEP22.v2.pdf

> L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings, so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?

To be honest, this sentence is a bit confusing since we explicitly show the delta-phi distributions but the recoil jet pT distributions are implicitly shown via the Iaa and R0.2/0.5 distributions. However, good catch! I think the pT^reco should have been pT^ch (after unfolding)...

 -- Derek

On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:29 AM Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:

Hi Derek, The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM proceedings. I sign off. One question though L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings, so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here? ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍

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Hi Derek,

   The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM proceedings. I sign off. One question though

L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings, so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?

thanks

Sooraj

On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:15 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Derek,

Please find a few comments on your nice proceedings.
As this is similar to your QM2022 proceedings, hence no major comments
on the interpretation and wording.

Abstract:
E_T (E_T^trig) -> Remove (E_T^trig); it is not needed in the abstract.
L14: "the parton showers are modified (jet quenching)[]" -> "the parton
showers are modified in the medium—the phenomenon is known as jet
quenching[]."
L21: "direct photons " -> do you need to make it italic?
L25: "direct photons are color…" -> Since the $\gamma_dir$ is color …
(as already $\gamma_dir$  in L21)
L31: and mean path length -> and the mean path length
L43-44: "…a certain threshold in energy." ->"…a certain threshold in
transverse energy."
L60: The residual jet 𝑝T … -> The residual jet transverse momentum
(𝑝T)-smearing …"
L67: …that Δ𝜙 smearing… -> …that the Δ𝜙 smearing…

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-10-15 00:46, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Please find my proceedings for ICHEP 2022 in the message below! The
> content is identical to the QM 2022 proceedings (aside from some
> slight rewording here and there) since the slides were essentially
> identical between the two conferences. Just like QM, proceedings for
> parallel talks are limited to 6 pages, and are due October 31st. Let
> me know if you have any comments or suggestions!
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Department of Physics

Kent State University

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Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
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