STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Derek,

the proceedings look good to me, I sign off.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, Oct 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Derek,

Thank you for implementing my comments. I don't have further comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-10-17 23:17, Derek Anderson wrote:
> Hi Nihar and Sooraj,
>
> Thanks for the feedback! I've implemented all of your suggestions in
> the link below, Nihar, and I've in-lined a response below, Sooraj. I
> also incorporated some comments from the referee at APPB which were
> relevant to these proceedings. Namely:
>
>       * Reference #5 has been fixed,
>       * Removed the "see the slides accompanying these proceedings"
> parenthetical, and
>
>       * Changed "this work funded" to "this work is funded" in the
> acknowledgements.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonDerek_ProceedingsICHEP22.v2.pdf
>
>> L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings,
> so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?
>
> To be honest, this sentence is a bit confusing since we explicitly
> show the delta-phi distributions but the recoil jet pT distributions
> are implicitly shown via the Iaa and R0.2/0.5 distributions. However,
> good catch! I think the pT^reco should have been pT^ch (after
> unfolding)...
>
>  -- Derek
>
> On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:29 AM Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hi Derek, The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM
>> proceedings. I sign off. One question though L69: You only show the
>> results from the latter in the proceedings, so why mention both? And
>> also why use pT^reco here? ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍
>> ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerStart
>>
>> This Message Is From an External Sender
>> This message came from outside your organization.
>>
>> ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerEnd
>> Hi Derek,
>> The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM
>> proceedings. I sign off. One question though
>>
>> L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings,
>> so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?
>>
>> thanks
>> Sooraj
>>
>> On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:15 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>>> Hello Derek,
>>>
>>> Please find a few comments on your nice proceedings.
>>> As this is similar to your QM2022 proceedings, hence no major
>>> comments
>>> on the interpretation and wording.
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>> E_T (E_T^trig) -> Remove (E_T^trig); it is not needed in the
>>> abstract.
>>> L14: "the parton showers are modified (jet quenching)[]" -> "the
>>> parton
>>> showers are modified in the medium—the phenomenon is known as
>>> jet
>>> quenching[]."
>>> L21: "direct photons " -> do you need to make it italic?
>>> L25: "direct photons are color…" -> Since the $\gamma_dir$ is
>>> color …
>>> (as already $\gamma_dir$  in L21)
>>> L31: and mean path length -> and the mean path length
>>> L43-44: "…a certain threshold in energy." ->"…a certain
>>> threshold in
>>> transverse energy."
>>> L60: The residual jet 𝑝T … -> The residual jet transverse
>>> momentum
>>> (𝑝T)-smearing …"
>>> L67: …that Δ𝜙 smearing… -> …that the Δ𝜙 smearing…
>>>
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>> On 2022-10-15 00:46, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> Please find my proceedings for ICHEP 2022 in the message below!
>>> The
>>>> content is identical to the QM 2022 proceedings (aside from some
>>>> slight rewording here and there) since the slides were
>>> essentially
>>>> identical between the two conferences. Just like QM, proceedings
>>> for
>>>> parallel talks are limited to 6 pages, and are due October 31st.
>>> Let
>>>> me know if you have any comments or suggestions!
>>>>
>>>> -- Derek
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Oct 14, 2022 at 3:12 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l@ lists. bnl. gov members, Derek Anderson
>>>>> (dmawxc@ physics. tamu. edu) has submitted a material for
>>> a
>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
> https: //urldefense. com/v3/__https: //drupal. star. bnl. gov/STAR/node/61339__;!!KwNVnqRv!Cs2u_Udn-8Q3FJ_Q9TI7xSQpX0SQLRVwlHUm8ZG_751vq-huPkS6OLNNklAR695VGFXQonmKMcJ0xty3kZWFWOP5HQwrjQ$
>>>>>
>>>>> ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerStart
>>>>>
>>>>> This Message Is From an External Sender
>>>>> This message came from outside your organization.
>>>>>
>>>>> ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerEnd
>>>>>
>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>
>>>>> Derek Anderson (dmawxc AT physics.tamu.edu) has submitted a
>>> material
>>>>> for a
>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61339__;!!KwNVnqRv!Cs2u_Udn-8Q3FJ_Q9TI7xSQpX0SQLRVwlHUm8ZG_751vq-huPkS6OLNNklAR695VGFXQonmKMcJ0xty3kZWFWOP5HQwrjQ$
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> ---
>>>>> If you have any problems with the review process, please
>>> contact
>>>>> webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
>>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>>> Star-hp-l mailing list
>>>>> Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l__;!!KwNVnqRv!Cs2u_Udn-8Q3FJ_Q9TI7xSQpX0SQLRVwlHUm8ZG_751vq-huPkS6OLNNklAR695VGFXQonmKMcJ0xty3kZWFWOPy5Udhrg$
>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>> Star-hp-l mailing list
>>>> Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
>>>> https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l [1]
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Star-hp-l mailing list
>>> Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
>>> https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l [1]
>>
>> --
>>
>> Sooraj Radhakrishnan
>>
>> Research Scientist,
>> Department of Physics
>>
>> Kent State University
>> Kent, OH 44243
>>
>> Physicist Postdoctoral AffiliateNuclear Science Division
>> Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
>> MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road
>> Berkeley, CA 94720
>> Ph: 510-495-2473 [2]
>>
>> Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov
>
>
> Links:
> ------
> [1]
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l__;!!KwNVnqRv!ClD06EXfNdr_os9476N20RLV51WhHMgjQ5Co2JsHWDlw2FG24VlyVwPvAlpdQ7-xm1WiaBsm9Jq2LfU3bhZoJQWHtDX3w0r4$
> [2] tel:%28510%29%20495-2473
_______________________________________________
Star-hp-l mailing list
Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l