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[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Derek,

Thank you for implementing my comments. I don't have further comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-10-17 23:17, Derek Anderson wrote:
> Hi Nihar and Sooraj,
>
> Thanks for the feedback! I've implemented all of your suggestions in
> the link below, Nihar, and I've in-lined a response below, Sooraj. I
> also incorporated some comments from the referee at APPB which were
> relevant to these proceedings. Namely:
>
>         * Reference #5 has been fixed,
>         * Removed the "see the slides accompanying these proceedings"
> parenthetical, and
>
>         * Changed "this work funded" to "this work is funded" in the
> acknowledgements.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonDerek_ProceedingsICHEP22.v2.pdf
>
> > L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings,
> so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?
>
> To be honest, this sentence is a bit confusing since we explicitly
> show the delta-phi distributions but the recoil jet pT distributions
> are implicitly shown via the Iaa and R0.2/0.5 distributions. However,
> good catch! I think the pT^reco should have been pT^ch (after
> unfolding)...
>
>  -- Derek
>
> On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:29 AM Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi Derek, The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM
> > proceedings. I sign off. One question though L69: You only show the
> > results from the latter in the proceedings, so why mention both? And
> > also why use pT^reco here? ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍
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> > The proceedings read nice. Its quite similar to the QM
> > proceedings. I sign off. One question though
> >
> > L69: You only show the results from the latter in the proceedings,
> > so why mention both? And also why use pT^reco here?
> >
> > thanks
> > Sooraj
> >
> > On Mon, Oct 17, 2022 at 11:15 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
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> > > Hello Derek,
> > >
> > > Please find a few comments on your nice proceedings.
> > > As this is similar to your QM2022 proceedings, hence no major
> > > comments
> > > on the interpretation and wording.
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > > E_T (E_T^trig) -> Remove (E_T^trig); it is not needed in the
> > > abstract.
> > > L14: "the parton showers are modified (jet quenching)[]" -> "the
> > > parton
> > > showers are modified in the medium—the phenomenon is known as
> > > jet
> > > quenching[]."
> > > L21: "direct photons " -> do you need to make it italic?
> > > L25: "direct photons are color…" -> Since the $\gamma_dir$ is
> > > color …
> > > (as already $\gamma_dir$  in L21)
> > > L31: and mean path length -> and the mean path length
> > > L43-44: "…a certain threshold in energy." ->"…a certain
> > > threshold in
> > > transverse energy."
> > > L60: The residual jet 𝑝T … -> The residual jet transverse
> > > momentum
> > > (𝑝T)-smearing …"
> > > L67: …that Δ𝜙 smearing… -> …that the Δ𝜙 smearing…
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > > Nihar
> > >
> > > On 2022-10-15 00:46, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > Hi all,
> > > >
> > > > Please find my proceedings for ICHEP 2022 in the message below!
> > > The
> > > > content is identical to the QM 2022 proceedings (aside from some
> > > > slight rewording here and there) since the slides were
> > > essentially
> > > > identical between the two conferences. Just like QM, proceedings
> > > for
> > > > parallel talks are limited to 6 pages, and are due October 31st.
> > > Let
> > > > me know if you have any comments or suggestions!
> > > >
> > > > -- Derek
> > > >
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> > Sooraj Radhakrishnan
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