STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Gabe,

   Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. It reads good and I sing off. Just a couple of minor comments, 

L6: Remove 'further' 

L11: Jet-Track is capitalization needed?

thanks

Sooraj

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 10:20 AM Gabe Dale-Gau via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Nihar and Barbara,

Thanks for reviewing my abstract. I have implemented the final comment and updated my submission page.

It is my understanding that I am not to submit anything directly to the conference, and the group will submit centrally.  Is there anything else you need from me before the submission date?

Thanks,

Gabe

On Mon, Nov 28, 2022 at 3:19 PM Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Gabe,

the abstract looks good to me, I sign off.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Nov 28, 2022 at 8:44 PM Gabe Dale-Gau via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Nihar,

Thanks for your comments on my abstract.

I have implemented them and updated my submission here.

I attempted to address your comment on motivation as well as techniques present in the study with a new sentence on lines 10-12. Let me know if you think this needs further modification and I will update again accordingly.

Best,

Gabe

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 4:31 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "Baryon to Meson Ratios in Jets, Au+Au Collisions at √sNN
=200GeV" -> " Measurements of Baryon-to-Meson Ratio in Jets  at √sNN
=200GeV in Au+Au Collisions by STAR"  How about this?

"baryon-to-meson" all places.

L1: "Experimental measurements at RHIC and LHC …" -> "Measurements at
RHIC and the LHC…"
L8-10: "Despite apparent…" and L10-12 "We present…" do not come up
smoothly. Please try to add one sentence why compelling to study
"baryon-to-meson ratio in jets at RHIC " ? For example, to explore the
behavior at lower energy, energy density, etc…

Please include some information about your analysis like PID, jet reco,
kinematic coverage etc to give insight to the abstract selection
committee.

Cheers
Nihar

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Sooraj Radhakrishnan

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Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44243

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
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Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov