STAR HardProbes PWG

[Gabe Dale-Gau <gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>]

Nihar,

Thanks for your comments on my abstract.

I have implemented them and updated my submission here.

I attempted to address your comment on motivation as well as techniques present in the study with a new sentence on lines 10-12. Let me know if you think this needs further modification and I will update again accordingly.

Best,

Gabe

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 4:31 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "Baryon to Meson Ratios in Jets, Au+Au Collisions at √sNN
=200GeV" -> " Measurements of Baryon-to-Meson Ratio in Jets  at √sNN
=200GeV in Au+Au Collisions by STAR"  How about this?

"baryon-to-meson" all places.

L1: "Experimental measurements at RHIC and LHC …" -> "Measurements at
RHIC and the LHC…"
L8-10: "Despite apparent…" and L10-12 "We present…" do not come up
smoothly. Please try to add one sentence why compelling to study
"baryon-to-meson ratio in jets at RHIC " ? For example, to explore the
behavior at lower energy, energy density, etc…

Please include some information about your analysis like PID, jet reco,
kinematic coverage etc to give insight to the abstract selection
committee.

Cheers
Nihar

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