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[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Hello Barbara and Nihar,

Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v2 on Drupal page. I kept the sentence about jet charge in this version, based on Raghav's previous e-mail.

Best regards,

Monika

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: 28. listopadu 2022 19:52:34
Komu: Nihar Sahoo; STAR HardProbes PWG
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Nihar, 

Just a quick point about the statement on jet charge. I suggested to Monika to include this so that we distinguish between charge (which is not substructure) and other observables built from the clustering information. We just wanted to say that it includes some more information such as the charge and point out its sensitivity to hadronization mechanisms.  

Cheers
Raghav 


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First Name - Raghav 
Last Name - Kunnawalkam Elayavalli
email - raghav.ke AT vanderbilt.edu 
website - https://www.raghavke.me 

RHIC/AGS UEC member
Assistant Professor of Physics
Stevenson Center 6410
Physics & Astronomy Department
Vanderbilt University 
Nashville, TN 37235-1807
<he/them>
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On Nov 27, 2022, at 9:41 PM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
"SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET SUBSTRUCTURE AT RHIC"

How about this?
SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE OF JET SUBSTRUCTURE in pp \sqrt{s}=200 GeV by STAR

Here:
"THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET SUBSTRUCTURE " doesn't sound good and not clear? Is there any better way to write?


L5: "Since jets are…" -> Jets are…
L6:"…hadrons, jet substructure…" -> "…hadrons. Jet substructure…"
L8: "In this study we use…" -> "In this study, we use…"
L10: "Cambridge/Aachen reclustering tree." -> Cambridge/Aachen reclustering algorithm. (Tree doesn't fit well here)
L15:"One of these observables…" -> This is not needed. Seems arbitrary.
L24: Finally, the data
L25: Monte Carlo models, such as …

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-11-27 21:28, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:

Hi Monika,
I have minor comments and sign off your nice abstract.
- Title: I would suggest adding STAR
- L18: In particular we explore -> In particular, we explore
Cheers,
Barbara
On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 8:57 AM Barbara Trzeciak
<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Monika,
that sounds good. Thank you for the combined abstract.
Cheers,
Barbara
On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 1:09 AM Monika Robotková via Star-hp-l
<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,
we prepared abstract that combines Youqi's, Raghav's and my
analyses. Because neither of them is able to go to Hard Probes, we
decided to prepare only one contribution which should be presented
by me in case the abstract is accepted.
Best regards,
Monika
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