STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika and Raghav,

Thank you for your replies.
Your abstract looks good to me.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-11-29 00:38, Monika Robotková wrote:
> Hello Barbara and Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and
> uploaded v2 on Drupal page. I kept the sentence about jet charge in
> this version, based on Raghav's previous e-mail.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Monika
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Raghav
> Kunnawalkam Elayavalli via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: 28. listopadu 2022 19:52:34
> Komu: Nihar Sahoo; STAR HardProbes PWG
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Just a quick point about the statement on jet charge. I suggested to
> Monika to include this so that we distinguish between charge (which is
> not substructure) and other observables built from the clustering
> information. We just wanted to say that it includes some more
> information such as the charge and point out its sensitivity to
> hadronization mechanisms.
>
> Cheers
> Raghav
>
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> Last Name - Kunnawalkam Elayavalli
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> > On Nov 27, 2022, at 9:41 PM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hello Monika,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> > Title:
> > "SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET
> > SUBSTRUCTURE AT RHIC"
> >
> > How about this?
> > SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE OF
> > JET SUBSTRUCTURE in pp \sqrt{s}=200 GeV by STAR
> >
> > Here:
> > "THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET SUBSTRUCTURE " doesn't
> > sound good and not clear? Is there any better way to write?
> >
> > L5: "Since jets are…" -> Jets are…
> > L6:"…hadrons, jet substructure…" -> "…hadrons. Jet
> > substructure…"
> > L8: "In this study we use…" -> "In this study, we use…"
> > L10: "Cambridge/Aachen reclustering tree." -> Cambridge/Aachen
> > reclustering algorithm. (Tree doesn't fit well here)
> > L15:"One of these observables…" -> This is not needed. Seems
> > arbitrary.
> > L24: Finally, the data
> > L25: Monte Carlo models, such as …
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-11-27 21:28, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > Hi Monika,
> > I have minor comments and sign off your nice abstract.
> > - Title: I would suggest adding STAR
> > - L18: In particular we explore -> In particular, we explore
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> > On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 8:57 AM Barbara Trzeciak
> > <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:
> > Hi Monika,
> > that sounds good. Thank you for the combined abstract.
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> > On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 1:09 AM Monika Robotková via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear all,
> > we prepared abstract that combines Youqi's, Raghav's and my
> > analyses. Because neither of them is able to go to Hard Probes, we
> > decided to prepare only one contribution which should be presented
> > by me in case the abstract is accepted.
> > Best regards,
> > Monika
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> > webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Odesláno: 23. listopadu 2022 1:01:00
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> > Předmět: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> > Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61829
> > Deadline: 2022-12-05
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