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[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Monika,

   Thanks for preparing the nice abstract. Just a couple of comments 

L16: Remove 'on the track charge'

L18: What is the difference implied here between ensemble level and jet-by-jet correlations? Arent all out measurements at ensemble level?

thanks

Sooraj

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 4:10 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Monika and Raghav,

Thank you for your replies.
Your abstract looks good to me.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-11-29 00:38, Monika Robotková wrote:
> Hello Barbara and Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and
> uploaded v2 on Drupal page. I kept the sentence about jet charge in
> this version, based on Raghav's previous e-mail.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Monika
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Raghav
> Kunnawalkam Elayavalli via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: 28. listopadu 2022 19:52:34
> Komu: Nihar Sahoo; STAR HardProbes PWG
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Just a quick point about the statement on jet charge. I suggested to
> Monika to include this so that we distinguish between charge (which is
> not substructure) and other observables built from the clustering
> information. We just wanted to say that it includes some more
> information such as the charge and point out its sensitivity to
> hadronization mechanisms.
>
> Cheers
> Raghav
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>> On Nov 27, 2022, at 9:41 PM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>> Hello Monika,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>> Title:
>> "SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET
>> SUBSTRUCTURE AT RHIC"
>>
>> How about this?
>> SYSTEMATIC EXPLORATION OF THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE OF
>> JET SUBSTRUCTURE in pp \sqrt{s}=200 GeV by STAR
>>
>> Here:
>> "THE PERTURBATIVE AND NON-PERTURBATIVE JET SUBSTRUCTURE " doesn't
>> sound good and not clear? Is there any better way to write?
>>
>> L5: "Since jets are…" -> Jets are…
>> L6:"…hadrons, jet substructure…" -> "…hadrons. Jet
>> substructure…"
>> L8: "In this study we use…" -> "In this study, we use…"
>> L10: "Cambridge/Aachen reclustering tree." -> Cambridge/Aachen
>> reclustering algorithm. (Tree doesn't fit well here)
>> L15:"One of these observables…" -> This is not needed. Seems
>> arbitrary.
>> L24: Finally, the data
>> L25: Monte Carlo models, such as …
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>> On 2022-11-27 21:28, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hi Monika,
>> I have minor comments and sign off your nice abstract.
>> - Title: I would suggest adding STAR
>> - L18: In particular we explore -> In particular, we explore
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>> On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 8:57 AM Barbara Trzeciak
>> <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi Monika,
>> that sounds good. Thank you for the combined abstract.
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>> On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 1:09 AM Monika Robotková via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> Dear all,
>> we prepared abstract that combines Youqi's, Raghav's and my
>> analyses. Because neither of them is able to go to Hard Probes, we
>> decided to prepare only one contribution which should be presented
>> by me in case the abstract is accepted.
>> Best regards,
>> Monika
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>> Předmět: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
>> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>> Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
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>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61829
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