STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Yang,

   Thanks for the updated version. I sign off with a few additional comments

L16: why use between? just specify the values at which you will present measurements. ' .... for jet raii of 0.2 ..and 0.5'

L21: will be presented. (at the end)

thanks

Sooraj

On Wed, Nov 30, 2022 at 6:26 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yang, Thank you for updating this abstract.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-11-30 19:29, yanghe wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thank you for your comments. I have updated it. Please have a look.
> In L10, I was trying to say "collectivity phenomenon observed in small
> collisions resembles collectivity phenomenon observed in large
> systems."
>
> Best,
> Yang
>
> 在 2022-11-30 12:32，Nihar Sahoo 写道：
>> Hello Yang,
>>
>> Please my additional comment on your abstract.
>>
>> L7: "…collisions, such as, Au+Au and Pb+Pb." -> "…collisions, such as
>> Au+Au and Pb+Pb."
>> L8: "in small systems, e.g. proton-nucleus collisions, …" -> "… in
>> small systems, e.g., proton-nucleus collisions, …"
>> L10: "…resembles that observed in …" -> "…that observed in …"
>> L11:" …a relatively smaller collision systems " -> " … relatively
>> smaller collision systems "
>> L13: "Utilizing mixed-event …" -> "Utilizing the mixed-event …"
>> L15:"… will report on the measurement …" -> "…will report the
>> measurement …"
>> L16:"…jet radii R …" -> "… jet radii…"
>> L17: "…algorithm. Results…" -> "…algorithm.  The trigger hadrons are
>> selected between transverse momentum 7 and X GeV/c. Results…" (add
>> this sentence and put your upper limit of trigger hadron at "X")
>> L18: "fully corrected jet yield (Y…) integrated…" -> "fully corrected
>> per trigger jet yield integrated" (drop Y(pT); not used further)
>> L19: "…and jet quenching observables I_CP ….-> " and their relative
>> suppression in central to peripheral collisions at mid-rapidity and
>> jet transverse momentum up to 30 GeV/c."
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>> On 2022-11-30 09:15, yanghe wrote:
>>> Dear conveners,
>>>
>>> Thank you all for your comments. I've updated the abstract. Please
>>> have a look.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Yang
>>>
>>>
>>> 在 2022-11-30 09:37，Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l 写道：
>>>> Hi Yang,
>>>>    Please find some comments from me to your nice abstract
>>>>
>>>> L5: This sentence can be removed
>>>> L9: Remove nuclei
>>>> L11: as the collectivity phenomenon observed in these collisions
>>>> resembles that observed in
>>>> L12: This study
>>>> L12: relatively
>>>> L16: report on the
>>>> L18: I dont think the isobar measurements will provide information
>>>> on
>>>> disappearance of jet quenching and its not clear what observations
>>>> you
>>>> are referring to here. Better to rephrase as will provide
>>>> information
>>>> on the system size dependence of jet quenching and in-medium jet
>>>> modification
>>>>
>>>> thanks
>>>> Sooraj
>>>>
>>>> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Yang,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments
>>>>> for your consideration.
>>>>> - General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in this
>>>>> analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s).
>>>>> - Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet
>>>>> - L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb
>>>>> - L12: This research --> This analysis
>>>>> - L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the
>>>>> aforementioned ones
>>>>>
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> Yi
>>>>>
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>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
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>>>>>> Yang He (yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a
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>>>>>> please have a look:
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>>>>
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>>>> Department of Physics
>>>>
>>>> Kent State University
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>>>>
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Sooraj Radhakrishnan

Research Scientist,

Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44243

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road

Berkeley, CA 94720

Ph: 510-495-2473

Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov