STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yang,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "hadron+Jet " -> hadron +jet ; "collisions at 200 GeV" -> 
"collisions at $\sqrt{s_\mathrm{NN}}$ = 200 GeV"
     "with the STAR experiment" -> "by STAR" or "in STAR"

L5: "To study the strong interaction …" -> This sentence is not 
required.
L7-9: "Jet quenching,…" -> "Jet quenching, modification of the jet 
properties arising from the jet-medium interaction in QGP, has been 
observed in high energy heavy-ion collisions, such as, Au+Au and Pb+Pb.
L11: "…as its collectively phenomenon assembles those in large systems." 
-> Not clear, please rephrase this.
L12:"This research aims at studying jet quenching in a …" -> "Jet 
quenching measurement in a relatively smaller collision system ( Zr+Zr 
and Ru+Ru) compared to Au+Au collisions at RHIC gives an insight to the 
system size and path length dependence of parton energy loss."
L18-20: "This measurement will …" -> Not sure that be the case or not. 
Please drop this sentence.
Instead, please mention the kinematic range and what observables you 
want to present.


Cheers
Nihar

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