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[yanghe <yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Sooraj,

Thank you for the comments. I've upload the new version.

Best,
Yang

在 2022-12-01 03:26，Sooraj Radhakrishnan 写道：
> Hi Yang,
>    Thanks for the updated version. I sign off with a few additional
> comments
>
> L16: why use between? just specify the values at which you will
> present measurements. ' .... for jet raii of 0.2 ..and 0.5'
> L21: will be presented. (at the end)
>
> thanks
> Sooraj
>
> On Wed, Nov 30, 2022 at 6:26 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Hi Yang, Thank you for updating this abstract.
> > I sign off.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-11-30 19:29, yanghe wrote:
> > > Hello Nihar,
> > >
> > > Thank you for your comments. I have updated it. Please have a
> > look.
> > > In L10, I was trying to say "collectivity phenomenon observed in
> > small
> > > collisions resembles collectivity phenomenon observed in large
> > > systems."
> > >
> > > Best,
> > > Yang
> > >
> > > 在 2022-11-30 12:32，Nihar Sahoo 写道：
> > > > Hello Yang,
> > > >
> > > > Please my additional comment on your abstract.
> > > >
> > > > L7: "…collisions, such as, Au+Au and Pb+Pb." -> "…collisions,
> > such as
> > > > Au+Au and Pb+Pb."
> > > > L8: "in small systems, e.g. proton-nucleus collisions, …" ->
> > "… in
> > > > small systems, e.g., proton-nucleus collisions, …"
> > > > L10: "…resembles that observed in …" -> "…that observed in
> > …"
> > > > L11:" …a relatively smaller collision systems " -> " …
> > relatively
> > > > smaller collision systems "
> > > > L13: "Utilizing mixed-event …" -> "Utilizing the mixed-event
> > …"
> > > > L15:"… will report on the measurement …" -> "…will report
> > the
> > > > measurement …"
> > > > L16:"…jet radii R …" -> "… jet radii…"
> > > > L17: "…algorithm. Results…" -> "…algorithm.  The trigger
> > hadrons are
> > > > selected between transverse momentum 7 and X GeV/c. Results…"
> > (add
> > > > this sentence and put your upper limit of trigger hadron at "X")
> > > > L18: "fully corrected jet yield (Y…) integrated…" -> "fully
> > corrected
> > > > per trigger jet yield integrated" (drop Y(pT); not used further)
> > > > L19: "…and jet quenching observables I_CP ….-> " and their
> > relative
> > > > suppression in central to peripheral collisions at mid-rapidity
> > and
> > > > jet transverse momentum up to 30 GeV/c."
> > > >
> > > > Cheers
> > > > Nihar
> > > >
> > > > On 2022-11-30 09:15, yanghe wrote:
> > > > > Dear conveners,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you all for your comments. I've updated the abstract.
> > Please
> > > > > have a look.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks,
> > > > > Yang
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > 在 2022-11-30 09:37，Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l
> > 写道：
> > > > > > Hi Yang,
> > > > > > Please find some comments from me to your nice abstract
> > > > > >
> > > > > > L5: This sentence can be removed
> > > > > > L9: Remove nuclei
> > > > > > L11: as the collectivity phenomenon observed in these
> > collisions
> > > > > > resembles that observed in
> > > > > > L12: This study
> > > > > > L12: relatively
> > > > > > L16: report on the
> > > > > > L18: I dont think the isobar measurements will provide
> > information
> > > > > > on
> > > > > > disappearance of jet quenching and its not clear what
> > observations
> > > > > > you
> > > > > > are referring to here. Better to rephrase as will provide
> > > > > > information
> > > > > > on the system size dependence of jet quenching and in-medium
> > jet
> > > > > > modification
> > > > > >
> > > > > > thanks
> > > > > > Sooraj
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > > > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Hi Yang,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor
> > comments
> > > > > > > for your consideration.
> > > > > > > - General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in
> > this
> > > > > > > analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s).
> > > > > > > - Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet
> > > > > > > - L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb
> > > > > > > - L12: This research --> This analysis
> > > > > > > - L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the
> > > > > > > aforementioned ones
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Cheers,
> > > > > > > Yi
> > > > > > >
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> > > > > > > On Mon, Nov 21, 2022 at 11:24 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Yang He (yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > > > > > > > review,
> > > > > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61792
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> > > > > > Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Research Scientist,
> > > > > > Department of Physics
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Kent State University
> > > > > > Kent, OH 44243
> > > > > >
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> Sooraj Radhakrishnan
>
> Research Scientist,
> Department of Physics
>
> Kent State University
>  Kent, OH 44243
>
> Physicist Postdoctoral AffiliateNuclear Science Division
> Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
> MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road
> Berkeley, CA 94720
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