STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Hi Yang,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

- General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in this analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s). 

- Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet

- L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb

- L12: This research --> This analysis

- L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the aforementioned ones

Cheers,

Yi

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