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[yanghe <yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear conveners,

Thank you all for your comments. I've updated the abstract. Please have 
a look.

Thanks,
Yang


在 2022-11-30 09:37，Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l 写道：
> Hi Yang,
>    Please find some comments from me to your nice abstract
>
> L5: This sentence can be removed
> L9: Remove nuclei
> L11: as the collectivity phenomenon observed in these collisions
> resembles that observed in
> L12: This study
> L12: relatively
> L16: report on the
> L18: I dont think the isobar measurements will provide information on
> disappearance of jet quenching and its not clear what observations you
> are referring to here. Better to rephrase as will provide information
> on the system size dependence of jet quenching and in-medium jet
> modification
>
> thanks
> Sooraj
>
> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi Yang,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments
> > for your consideration.
> > - General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in this
> > analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s).
> > - Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet
> > - L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb
> > - L12: This research --> This analysis
> > - L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the
> > aforementioned ones
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
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> > On Mon, Nov 21, 2022 at 11:24 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Yang He (yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61792
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> Sooraj Radhakrishnan
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